Supernatural ficlet: Pearls

Jul 31, 2008 20:59

Pearls [Supernatural, Sam/Jess, adult, 691 words, written for Porn Battle VI, prompt pearl, original entry. For deirdre_c, a belated happy birthday.]

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fiction: supernatural, fiction, fandom: supernatural

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vamptastica August 7 2008, 17:12:46 UTC
that was beautiful sweetie. made me a bit sad though thinking of what poor sammy lost.

beautiful though. I think i'm a bit melancholy today or something. poor sam.

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oxoniensis August 10 2008, 20:48:02 UTC
Thank you!

I was just saying to someone else that Sam and Jess together is always going to be a bit bittersweet, however happy the moment they're enjoying.

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counteragent August 8 2008, 22:15:02 UTC
Aw, that was sweet and super hot.

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oxoniensis August 10 2008, 20:48:22 UTC
Thank you so much! :-)

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oxoniensis September 17 2008, 12:49:00 UTC
Thank you! More schmoop than porn, really, but I tried! *g*

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sothereyougo January 6 2009, 21:52:03 UTC
Just purely from the visual and aesthetic aspect, Sam and Jess are so beautiful together, both so long-limbed and leggy, and you captured that beautifully here. Jess seems like Botticelli's The Birth of Venus, only more visceral, all wet and naked with the shell-pink toenails. Did you do that on purpose?

Also, hot sex is great and all, *duh to the infinite power* but there's something so textured and tender about sex when the people are really in love. This is reverential and sweet, and if you put it in a jar it would taste like a bite out of the soft center of a thick slab of perfectly toasted bread soaked in melted butter and drenched with warm honey. (That last simile is a bit odd, but I didn't know how else to describe the sensuality.)

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oxoniensis January 20 2009, 23:00:33 UTC
They are such an incredibly gorgeous pair - I know Dean jokes that Jess is out of Sam's league in the pilot, but I think they look stunning together.

As for The Birth of Venus, I see exactly what you mean - I only wish I had thought of it!

It's a lovely simile you've used, I think - something natural and wholesome and sweet and hot at the same time. Thank you so much!

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