Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) - Entry post 2

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) - POST TWO

We're running out of space on the first post (I don't want to limit feedback or responses at all), and we're only half way through, so I'm opening a new post up for entries. I am SO impressed with you all - thanks to everyone who's taken part so far for making this such a success. I've updated the

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Lead You All The Way Home, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Willow/Tara, burn

[wisdomeagle]

Tara's fingers cup the flame, yellowing into orange. A breath arches the flames, and they lick upward, escaping Tara's finger-cage, lapping, kittenish, at her cheeks. She shivers, like the flames are ice, and breathes more magic into them. They leap taller now, Superman strong, and escape entirely from Tara's hands, engulfing her face and making her shine more golden and foreign than is usual, even for Tara, who breathes spells. A crooked smile from behind the flames, an invitation from the woman beneath the fire to come inhale her -- it's enough, and Willow pounces

Re: Leads You All The Way Home, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Willow/Tara, flame

[taskir]

Wow. This is just absolutely beautiful.

Re: Leads You All The Way Home, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Willow/Tara, flame

[wisdomeagle]

Thank you so much.

Re: Lead You All The Way Home, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Willow/Tara, burn

[spiletta42]

She thought that mingling magic and sex would improve the tingle of sex and make it more like magic, overflowing, decadent, straight to her groin impossible power. But it doesn't.

I like what you did with this. Willow expects magic to make things better, and that foreshadows her struggles with addiction, and failing to really understand the power of it. And the imagery of the flame is really lovely, too.

Re: Lead You All The Way Home, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Willow/Tara, burn

[wisdomeagle]

Thanks so much!

Re: Lead You All The Way Home, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Willow/Tara, burn

[wisdomeagle]

Thank you!