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The Porn Battle (Fourth Verse, Same as the First)

Jul 11, 2007 18:55

THE PORN BATTLE (FOURTH VERSE, SAME AS THE FIRST) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt from below (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. That's all folks - just one bit of steamy, panty-wetting porn. Make it as kinky or as ( Read more... )

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Untitled, A Song of Ice and Fire, Sansa/Petyr, ruin redcandle17 July 11 2007, 23:55:56 UTC

Petyr’s wanking when the thought comes to him. It’s more an image than a thought actually: Sansa naked across his lap, with her arse red. The fantasy makes him come. Later he begins to think about it more and more often. Then fantasy alone is no longer enough. He has to make it real. He starts to look for an excuse.

Finally one presents itself - Sansa is unusually impatient with little Robert and makes him cry in front of Nestor Royce. She apologizes when they’re alone in his solar and she sounds so sincere that Petyr’s almost sorry for what he’s about to do ( ... )

Re: Untitled, A Song of Ice and Fire, Sansa/Petyr, ruin curtana July 12 2007, 00:16:32 UTC

Oh, excellent! I loved this, it's so in-character, especially for Petyr. And you used one of the patented GRRM catch-phrases that always makes me chuckle, "almost a woman grown". Beautiful work! :)

Re: Untitled, A Song of Ice and Fire, Sansa/Petyr, ruin redcandle17 July 12 2007, 00:53:43 UTC

Thanks, glad someone liked it because my flist may kill me for writing it. :P

"Almost a man/woman grown" is one of the funniest lines in the series, especially since 7yr old Bran is so fond of using it!

Re: Untitled, A Song of Ice and Fire, Sansa/Petyr, ruin curtana July 12 2007, 02:10:44 UTC

Oh, definitely! I just wrote my own Sansa/Petyr story, using the other prompt, as a sequel to yours - hope you don't mind!

Re: Untitled, A Song of Ice and Fire, Sansa/Petyr, ruin thepiratequeen July 13 2007, 02:45:14 UTC

Creepy and yet kinda hot.

Love the last line.

Re: Untitled, A Song of Ice and Fire, Sansa/Petyr, ruin redcandle17 July 13 2007, 03:49:08 UTC

Littlefinger/Sansa couldn't not be creepy. :P

Re: Untitled, A Song of Ice and Fire, Sansa/Petyr, ruin luminations November 30 2014, 04:22:21 UTC

Creepy and wrong and delicious :) Nice work!

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