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The Porn Battle (Fourth Verse, Same as the First)

Jul 11, 2007 18:55

THE PORN BATTLE (FOURTH VERSE, SAME AS THE FIRST) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt from below (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. That's all folks - just one bit of steamy, panty-wetting porn. Make it as kinky or as ( Read more... )

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Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks wisdomeagle July 11 2007, 20:36:22 UTC

It's the first U-Day in the history of Mal that it's come to be evening and he's not yet found a tavern brawl to instigate. He blames Kaylee, who has a way of lookin' at a man wheedlin'-like and implying with her eyes that he can go fight-hunting all he wants but if he expects anything more than a goodnight kiss later on, he'd best keep his nose clean.

"Well, what would you suggest?" he asks, exasperated. "I ain't celebrating the Alliance and I ain't keeping my mouth shut, and we've been holed up on this planet for near a week ( ... )

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks oxoniensis July 11 2007, 20:58:48 UTC

Oh, just perfect character voices here! Especially Kaylee's "You could try using your powers for good instead of evil and open your mouth around my quim," Kaylee suggests, and makes it sound innocent as drinking booze and toasting freedom with a backhand to someone's jaw.

I loved this. Loved that it isn't perfect (in all the ways you show in the last paragraph) but it's good, and it gives them a moment's happiness, and in the world they live in, that's enough to keep them going.

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks wisdomeagle July 11 2007, 21:23:50 UTC

Yay, thank you! It's been awhile since I've written Firefly (or, um, anything) so it's good to find I remember them.

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Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks wisdomeagle July 11 2007, 23:52:11 UTC

Thanks!

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks cadence_k July 11 2007, 23:18:50 UTC

Ari!!

I just loved this. I've missed just how perfectly you capture their voices. Like it's been stated above, I love how not-perfect their situation is and how it is totally THEM. Great stuff!

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks wisdomeagle July 11 2007, 23:53:28 UTC

Cady! :)

Thank you so much! As I seem to be saying a lot lately, yeah. I miss me-writing too.

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks curtana July 12 2007, 00:19:21 UTC

Beautiful characterizations in this! The voices sound like them, and, as everyone else is saying, the situation is great - not idealized, just real. Thank you!

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks wisdomeagle July 12 2007, 04:25:46 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks musesfool July 12 2007, 02:10:29 UTC

Oh, lovely.

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks wisdomeagle July 12 2007, 04:26:27 UTC

Thanks! (I totally thought of you while writing this, unsurprisingly.)

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks musesfool July 12 2007, 04:42:48 UTC

Hee! I'm very happy to be associated with Mal/Kaylee.

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks pesha July 12 2007, 08:19:15 UTC

I love the way that they're perfectly human which makes them not perfectly perfect. It felt very real and very natural which is what I always loved about Kaylee in the series.

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks wisdomeagle July 20 2007, 01:47:04 UTC

Thank you! I adore that about Kaylee as well. That, and, well, everything else about her.

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks luke2 July 12 2007, 13:42:31 UTC

Mal and Kaylee always bring a smile to my face. Thank you for this.

Re: Unification, Firefly, Kaylee/Mal, fireworks wisdomeagle July 20 2007, 02:16:24 UTC

Thanks! (I think they do the same for each other. :))

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