Smallville ficlet: 'Feels Like Betrayal'

Feb 08, 2006 21:25

Kiss #3: Smallville, Lionel and Martha (suggested by phantomwise), G, 320 words. Major spoiler for 5.12 Reckoning.

Feels Like Betrayal )

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ingridmatthews February 8 2006, 22:05:07 UTC
ROWR!

Come on, Martha ... you know you wanna give in. Hee!

Lionel reaches out to her and places a gloved hand on her arm, faintly possessive

*drowns in drool* Yep. Yep. Yep.

You know I love this, right?

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oxoniensis February 9 2006, 20:10:44 UTC
Hee, as I had Martha answering Lionel's booty calls (while Jonathan mooed plaintively in the field) last week, I thought I'd take a stronger line this week! She's not going to cave easily!! *g*

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thecaelum February 8 2006, 22:16:49 UTC
I adore this little story so much. This is *exactly* how Martha and Lionel would begin, surface politeness with endless depth and subtext beneath it. When this thing finally comes to a head between them, it will be like waking a sleeping dragon.

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oxoniensis February 9 2006, 20:12:38 UTC
Aww, thanks so much!

There have certainly been plenty of signs over the years that the attraction's not all one way. I'm torn between wanting Martha to go for it and have some fun for once, and shrieking at her to run for her life! *g*

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ceruleancat February 8 2006, 22:27:45 UTC
Thank you. :)

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oxoniensis February 9 2006, 20:13:05 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it!

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svmadelyn February 8 2006, 23:20:51 UTC
It's all just so wrong. *joyous*

Lovely writing.

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oxoniensis February 9 2006, 20:15:27 UTC
It's all just so wrong. *joyous*

*laughs* Well, technically, she's free to go for it now...

Lovely writing.

Thanks!

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garryowen February 9 2006, 00:20:06 UTC
oxoniensis February 9 2006, 20:16:20 UTC
Lionel is one creepy man, that's for sure! But there's definitely a spark there...

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garryowen February 9 2006, 20:31:04 UTC

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