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overstreets

Supernatural fic; Gen; PG

Feb 28, 2007 17:45

Title: Untitled
Rating: PG
Pairing: None
Word Count: 2,365
Summary: Jess is gone, Sam tries to cope, Dean tries to help. Set directly after the pilot. Oneshot.
Author's Notes: So I sat down yesterday and this came out. This is the first fic I've posted in about two years. This is the first fic I've finished in two years. o.o The mistakes are all ( Read more... )

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Comments 31

nereem February 28 2007, 23:43:25 UTC

1) lovely layout- i like the header.

2) OMGAH, you broke me. YOU BROKE ME. This is incredibly sad but very real. I have always wondered why there hasn'tbeen much pieces to cover the loss of Jess. I like the guys single, because, yeah, im a wincest at heart and i like how they bounce off each other. But i always wondered why we never saw Sam's grief for losing Jess. So much in fact that TODAY, i wrote a small fic MYSELF- and then this- THIS comes out and seriously- its beautifully sad and really, it needed to be done. Well done you, for writing it! :) Sniff.... *huggles*

overstreets March 1 2007, 00:07:11 UTC

1) It's the boys that make it beautiful. Thanks!

2) YOU are breaking ME with your wonderful comments! I've always loved the Jess aspect of Supernatural. I wish they'd gone into it more in the show, how Sam dealt with his grief and how Dean dealt with Sam's grief, but alas, they skipped ahead one week and we saw nothing but a few tiny snippets along the way in season one. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I was really worried that I didn't handle it correctly because grief is such a weird thing in itself. XD Thaaaank you~ ♥ *huggles*

momigi March 1 2007, 00:55:00 UTC

Oh... my... god... this was just... words can't even describe how wonderful this is! It's just... wow...

overstreets March 1 2007, 01:44:56 UTC

*gives you hearts* ♥ ♥ ♥ Thanks so much, Spinel! *___*

neroli66 March 1 2007, 01:31:10 UTC

This is..wow..it's beautiful and it hurts.

overstreets March 1 2007, 01:46:28 UTC

I'm so happy you think so. ;__; *mends your hurty with happy!Dean* Thank you!

chained_fire March 1 2007, 02:13:25 UTC

Wow, you rock. Seriously. I can't believe that you haven't finished a fic in the past two years. It doesn't seem like it at all.

I love how you portrayed Sam's grief over Jessica's death. They never really showed us that in the show so reading this was just really great.

I love how you wrote Dean. Some of the things that you wrote like him being annoyed by Sam's cell phone, protecting Sam from his friends, and even the comment about Sam needing a haircut really made this fic shine for me.

I like how you wrote that Dean didn't really know how to comfort Sam and how he wanted John to come but at the same time being angry at him for not being there already. Man, I can just go on and on, but this comment is already getting kind of too long.

The main thing I want to say is that this was awesome and you're awesome. I hope to read more fics from you in the future.

overstreets March 1 2007, 02:33:18 UTC

Omg, you gave me such a nice long comment. *___* I'm glad you thought they were in character! It was really hard getting Dean down as comforting without being TOO overly mushy. XD And I love writing Sammich emotion. Sammich just bleeds emotion.

Thanks! I want more fics from you too, you hear? ;o

ladyfiresprite March 1 2007, 05:56:15 UTC

Beautiful!!!!

overstreets March 1 2007, 13:21:30 UTC

Thank you for reading!