Supernatural fic; Sam/Dean; R

[overstreets]

Title: Your Lips Are Venomous Poison
Rating: R
Pairings: Sam/Dean, Dean/random bargirl
Word Count: 4,581
Disclaimer: I don't own Supernatural.
Notes: I've only written gen and het for SPN before, so here's me trying some good old Sam/Dean angst. This was inspired by a song by Groove Coverage called Poison; there's a link to the mp3 at the end of

Comments

[persephone_c]

Oh that was painful... so, so painful... ;___;

Sequel? Please?? Pretty please with nekkid dean on top? XD

[overstreets]

Thanks for reading! ♥ And technically this takes place before the Pilot, so we all know that our boys will be reunited again eventually. :D

[ckll]

I loved the plot of the story and how you showed the emotions.

[overstreets]

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading! ♥

[ruby_jelly]

"suddenly Dean felt like a cheap whore,"
This line hurt, so much. And then: "The loneliness of the past four months hit him abruptly like a ton of bricks, and to his horror he felt a hot prickly feeling at the corners of his eyes." Oh, poor Dean; brave Sam. What a mess!

Beautifully written. Thankyou.

[overstreets]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! What a mess, indeed. ;) Thank you so much for reading! ♥

[lima_sierra]

Sob! So so good. Painful but a good pain. And gotta love Poison. You captured the feeling bheing the lyrics witht his perfectly.

[overstreets]

I'm so glad you think so! Thanks so much for reading! ♥

[ellel]

That was heartbreaking!!!Beautiful and hot and achy too.Even if I know they'll reunite later,still-the Wincesty angst,you know...
*sighs*

[overstreets]

Yes, the Wincesty angst gets me every time. ;) Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥