This is the Last...//Corrupted//Just start//Louder [Drabbles]

May 21, 2008 11:26

Title: This is the last...//Corrupted//Just start//Louder
Author: outori
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ruki x Uruha
Genre: Drabble.
Warnings: Not beta-read.
Disclaimer: Not owning anyone in the drabbles, only the drabbles
Synopsis: Not really needed for a drabble ne, but just in case you want to skip angst ~ the first one is angsty, the rest smutty.
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uruhaxruki, fanfiction

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shii_tan July 31 2008, 22:40:03 UTC
This has to be the sixth time I read these since you posted them.

lol Like the first five times, it's difficult for me to come up with anything coherent to say. The rhythm, the effectiveness of those sentences trigger a visceral response in me, and I'm having troubles putting it into words. : makes face :

The first two are my favorites. I also have to tell you that the last sentence of the second one made me feel weak in the knees. It completely took me off-guard. That was freaky and terrific at the same time.

Thank you for writing these.

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outori July 31 2008, 23:57:46 UTC
Oh... wow. ^ ^" I'm always kind of dumbfound when I get unexpected comments on fics... especially when they're like this.

It's flattering and an honour to hear that such little things, so few words, can do things to people. I tend to write rather long and detailed, drabbles really are not anywhere close to what I could call 'my strength'. Or so I thought.

Your comment seems rather coherent to ~me~. I tend to be one to write rather very incoherent comments myself, so ...o-o

And I very much love your comment. It's little things like these that make one sit down and write more, ne. trigger a visceral response, I loved that. s well as you going weak in your knees.

Your comment , your reactions, caught me off-guard. ^ ^ Don't hesitate with commenting - I rather like what you call 'incoherent'

Thank you for that.

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