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zeenell in out_of_con_txt

F/K ficlet PG-13

Jun 18, 2006 13:57

17. Fraser/RayK. "Look, Fraser, we tried that last night and it didn't work." for alden_k
Thanks to lady_of_water for the quick beta. Con crit welcome :-p

Sorry this is late - My neighbor offered me 60 to babysit, and she has no internet. Got home at 4Am and crashed. The other two ficlets are at beta and should be posted shortly.

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ficlet, fraser/kowalski

Comments 14

sansets June 19 2006, 03:45:37 UTC

Oh the wonderfulness! I am totally going to have this story as a mental image now everytime I read a first time fic between these two. *g* And then I will begin to laugh, and I think that I might just need to re-read this now, because it simply made me quite happy. :-)

zeenell June 19 2006, 06:30:56 UTC

Awww... what a nice thing to say ^_^

Your comment made me happy.

mcalex22 June 19 2006, 10:03:21 UTC

Love this - I thought you got the voices right... hehe, typical Fraser - ask him to buy lube and he ends up walking into a robbery! :D

the_antichris June 21 2006, 01:59:08 UTC

Aw, this is really cute. I love the dialogue.

ifreet June 26 2006, 18:20:02 UTC

Love the shopping instructions.

Love the tuna can.

Love Ray's parting shot.