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justbreathe80 in out_of_con_txt

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Jun 17, 2006 09:06

A Fair Fight
F/K/V, NC-17, 1205 words

Prompt 11: "Fraser, you want to give me back my gun now?"
for lordessrenegade

A million thanks to secret_garden for the rockin' beta from half way across the world, and for letting me steal Velma.

( Velma came back with a gigantic stuffed wolf, of all things, smiling at Ray and Fraser. “Here you go, mister,” she said, with a wink and a smile. )

ficlet, fraser/kowalski/vecchio

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justbreathe80 June 18 2006, 22:16:47 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! *g*

mergatrude June 19 2006, 02:15:44 UTC

Yay! That was very hot. I'm so glad I was able to help.

justbreathe80 June 19 2006, 15:21:32 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yes yes, you were so very, very helpful! And Velma was a wonderful addition. *g*

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justbreathe80 June 20 2006, 14:58:21 UTC

You're very welcome, dear! YAY!

jeia_moore June 19 2006, 23:17:14 UTC

*Is it hot in here or what?* Ooh yummy! - I love Fraser/Ray K together, but there's something about voyeuristic Vecchio, that just pushes my buttons .“Come on, Fraser, give it up,” *melts slowly into the floor*.

justbreathe80 June 20 2006, 14:59:17 UTC

Yes, there are endless voyeuristic possibilities with F/K/V, it's fantastic.

Thank you SO much! *beams*

brooklinegirl June 20 2006, 01:48:30 UTC

omg, dude, this came out AWESOME. I love, love, love it, and jesus, how hot is this:

Fraser aimed, and pushed Ray’s finger against the trigger once, reaimed, twice, then again a third time. Got every single one, perfectly.

it's the DETAILS that get to me, Fraser re-aiming, hitting everything perfectly, and all pressed against Ray the entire time, with Vecchio *watching* and omfg, HOTNESS.

When they got to the GTO, Ray grinned and tossed the keys to Vecchio. Vecchio gave him a shocked look, because Ray never let Vecchio drive the Goat.

I can't tell you how fucking much I love you for that. Because, okay, backseat sex is one of my number one kinks, BUT, more importantly: you involved Vecchio through a) letting him watching, but also, hi, b) driving the GTO is TOTALLY a sexual experience for him. *LOVES*

Ray got in beside him, pulling the door shut and the seat back. “Let’s get a move on, Vecchio,” Ray said, reaching over to stroke his fingers along the inside seam of Fraser’s jeans, smiling as Fraser groaned and pushed up into Ray ( ... )

justbreathe80 June 20 2006, 15:02:13 UTC

Yeah, I needed to work in the gun without, you know, working in the gun. HEE!

I'm so very glad you liked this dear, and I credit you with the seed of the idea, because I was totally at a loss with the prompt.

YAY PORN! I'm so glad you liked it! *mwah*

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