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Shut Your Eyes - Chapter 22

May 07, 2011 03:45

Title: Shut Your Eyes
Authors: goten0040 and garnetice
Chapter: 22
Rating: M
Ship(s): Kendall/James, Carlos/Stephanie, Logan/Camille, maybe more.
Summary: Future!Fic. Kendall returns to L.A. six years after Big Time Rush disbanded. James has been missing for years. Imagine how things change when James reappears in his life. And he needs help.
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takenliterally May 7 2011, 15:03:06 UTC

Can you please never stop writing this story? Because then I would have to stop reading it, and then I might die. Really. I just found it a few weeks ago, and I've been desperately awaiting the posting of this chapter, which I just eagerly devoured, and I will now wait with bated breath for the next installment. But just... yes. Please. More. I love fallen-apart-not-in-control-Kendall, and I love family-man-Carlos, and I love wise-and-pregnant-Stephanie. I even love dickhead-druggie-James. But most of all, I think I love grown-up-kind-of-slutty-Katie, because, of all of them, she's still so Katie.

In any case, it's been a long time since I've done any writing myself - years, really. And reading this - it makes me feel like maybe I could give it a go again. So thanks for that. And give me more, please. Soon.

goten0040 May 10 2011, 00:54:26 UTC

Well, if I may say for both of us, we're extremely flattered that we inspire you!

And no worries about the next chapter! I may or may not have already written it... And it's... juicy... to say the least. In fact, I should probably apologize now. Haha!! So be prepared!

garnetice May 10 2011, 05:01:29 UTC

LOL I wish. I would love for this to go on for all eternity- my lovely co-author definitely keeps me writing when I'd otherwise be Way. Too. Lazy. Also, YAY because slutty Katie is kind of my favorite. Shh, don't tell anyone.

WRITE. We both love it when people write things! Anything! Sad things! Happy things! We just love to read things! And if we've given you any kind of inspiration, I can say personally that I think that is the biggest compliment you can give any author, ever. ♥

phantompearl May 8 2011, 18:58:59 UTC

I love the scene at the street and how it starts with a pleasant greeting and then turns really bad and then that whole promise part, and I love this line “You’re not going anywhere. Stop testing me. Stop trying to see if I’ll leave if you do something horrible, okay?” This was so great. <3<3<3

garnetice May 10 2011, 04:57:40 UTC

YAY that makes me happy. That was my favorite line- I built almost the entire fight scene around that and this unshakable image I've had in my head through the whole story of James smoking a cigarette on some random LA street. Which I obviously keep using over and over again.

It makes me so happy when you always comment. I get so nervous and I swear, it is your comments and goten0040 being awesome that keeps me together through writing this thing.

phantompearl May 10 2011, 05:16:39 UTC

Yeah, when ya read that line you're like "Damn, that's exactly what's been happening!"

:3 I enjoy spreading the lurve, especially to you two. <3<3

goten0040 May 10 2011, 06:25:50 UTC

PFFF YOU'RE AWESOME. Don't forget that I nearly cried I was so happy when you said you'd write this with me. And LOOK HOW FAR WE'VE COME.

All these feels! rockchickwrites December 26 2012, 02:36:26 UTC

I'm in love with this story. I am so emotional about it that I can't stop thinking about it. My feels for Kames is so heightened right now. James all drugged out is so devastating. But Kendall needs him, they need each other. That was the missing element of happiness for both of them. Love this story!