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Mar 18, 2012 02:13

Title: Black and White
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: Donghae/Henry/Hyukjae, Hyukjae/Donghae
Genre: Angst, romance.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: It's complicated, what they were doing. There were no explanation, no name or label to it.
A/N: My first time writing smut so of course it would be awkward as hell. Editing this was painful for me because I had to ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, genre: angst, band: super junior, genre: slice of life, pairing: donghae/henry/hyukjae, genre: romance

Comments 13

monkeylovefishy March 17 2012, 19:43:26 UTC

Wow O_O
I've never really read a OT3 fanfic with like, all of them in love. Sure some SiHanChul but otherwise, nada. But this was REALLY good!
The theme is awesome, the writing too. Really good job! :D

nadz144 March 18 2012, 11:45:27 UTC

Well, if you read QMiMin, there's a lot of fic with three of them in love. :)

And thank you so much for reading ^^

monkeylovefishy March 18 2012, 13:26:29 UTC

I'm not so fond of Qmi but I could look it up, thanks~

And you're welcome ^^

warrior1a4 March 17 2012, 20:45:20 UTC

You made me like EunHenHae now hihi!

Seriously though, this was AMAZING!

The pictures added like this kind of mood around the story which sucked me in more, if you get what I mean. Everything was written so good and the theme was really great too :D!

*claps in hands*

Good job ! :D

nadz144 March 18 2012, 11:46:54 UTC

Thank you :)

Finding the right picture to fit EunHae was a pain though, lol. But it paid off.

/bows. Thank you for reading.

alexanderfannie March 17 2012, 21:59:55 UTC

This is so good and realistic that I will never think of eunhaery the same again

nadz144 March 18 2012, 11:50:29 UTC

Haha thank you. n_n

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nadz144 March 18 2012, 11:43:20 UTC

LOL, yeah sorry about that. I misplaced the picture. So I'm really sorry and it's fixed now ^^

Thank you for reading ^^

gunhaeree March 18 2012, 05:31:42 UTC

God double penetrate!! I should kiss u for making this! Thank u!

nadz144 March 18 2012, 11:51:47 UTC

My first time writing smut and I write DP /facepalm. I'm glad it wasn'y as awkward as I thought it was.

Thank you for reading n_n

whisper_wisp March 31 2012, 07:46:33 UTC

QUUURRRRRRRRRLLLLLLLL SHIT I DIDN'T KNOW THAT YOU HAD POSTED THIS A;KLSDJF FUCK OKAY HOT OKAY YOU KNOW WHAT I ALREADY TOLD YOU EVERYTHING YOU DID A LOT I LIKE THIS AND THE FINAL IS REALLY REALLY NOSEBLEED THE END MY LIFE IS SHIT NOW SOB OKAY HEY YOUR BIRTHDAY GIIIIRRRRRLLLLLLL SOB OKAY MY LIFE SOBS THE END
OKAY YOU REALLY DID A GOOD JOB OKAY I'M GLAD YOU USED PICTURES THAT ARE REALLY FITTING FOR IT :"")