►CRiTiQUE☆

Dec 15, 2008 11:49

how's my driving?

Of course no one's perfect at role-playing! I am no exception. If you have any complaints, advice, suggestions, or any comments at all on how I portray Hitachiin Hikaru from Ouran Koukou Host Club, PLEASE leave them here. I love constructive criticism, and I take it all very thankfully -- I will try to improve, if you tell me I ( Read more... )

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ourculminant April 12 2009, 18:43:23 UTC
I really, really appreciate everything you've said. I agree on all points, unfortunately.

I have been very inactive with him - I feel that if I had been active with him from the get-go, that we wouldn't be in this situation currently. I've not been liking anything that I've been doing here, since I've slowly been returning, and I also feel that my portrayal here of Hikaru has been very weak and very shallow. It's my fault, of course, but when speaking with Kaoru-mun on the issue - though I'm aware the responsibility lies fully on me to comment around and such - we've not been able to come up with much of a solution. It is my goal to be more active, and I have been making that effort more, now that I've had the time - beforehand, I was suddenly very busy and, no, I did not have the motivation for such a fast paced game.

We've been meaning for a long time to have the twins have a talk about the situation; Hikaru would be very upset that Kaoru has so many friends that Hikaru doesn't know, it's true - and also, Hikaru was very upset to ( ... )

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