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Under His Care (From an all-around newb)

Jul 27, 2012 08:38

Hello!

I apologize if cross-posting isn't welcome. I'm relatively new to the fanfic community, and this is my first piece, so I just wanted to share. I hope you enjoy; let me know what you think!

Title: Under His Care
Series: Part 1 of 2, 1,467 words
Pairing/Character: Kyouya/Haruhi
Rating: M
Summary: Kyoya offered a playful, albeit unseen smirk, as he ( Read more... )

g : romance, p : kyouya ootori/haruhi fujioka, c : kyouya ootori, c : haruhi fujioka, r : nc-17, g : smut

Comments 4

cyn_ful July 27 2012, 23:25:22 UTC

I love Haruchi's trust.

rhetoricfem July 28 2012, 20:26:06 UTC

Thanks!

I've never really seen her as being leary of any of the host club members. She's insightful enough that if she felt compromised by any of them, I don't think she'd even be there. All her questions and suspicions seem to come from an endearing place, so I can only imagine it being elevated if she were in an actual relationship with any of them. :)

sweet_tard July 28 2012, 08:33:13 UTC

Their dialogue is really spot-on.

rhetoricfem July 28 2012, 20:24:35 UTC

Ah, thank you!!!

Honestly, that means a lot to me, as theirs are the most natural voices for me in the series. The others are also perfect the way they are, but I think I just share a wavelength with the concept of who both Kyouya and Haruhi are, and I think they're brilliant together. :)