Not bad. (: I've watched this cartoon, which I don't even remember the title, when I was a kid. According to the cartoon clouds don't cry, but they pee. LOLOL.
the moon as the cheese reminds me of nursury rhymes. if yunho keeps thinking that the moon is cheese, it must mean that he's really hungry. :D it also reminds me of candyland, where everything is food and sweets.
then i see the descriptions that you give of the earth that yunho sees and i think "you are such a loner man! you need to get somebody (somebody being jae) becaue you aren't romantic enough. they sound all nice and poetic fr a reason." haha. but i guessed right about jae though. ^.^
what reminded me of jae was the fluffy pouting cloud. but it would be cute though that a cloud (jae) has a crush on yunho (human) and is following him around for a whole day and seeing his daily life, pouting when he's with a girl and rumble for yunho to look up at him and notice him. the mouse on the mooon would be changmin though. the sun is yoochun and stars are junsu since he is avoiding the annoying sun. :D
heehee reminds me too :D i just thought it was funny how people assume the moon looks like cheese lol i have no idea how did they end up with that but it's probably the spot and sometimes the color is yellow on certain nights :\
haha indeed xD yunho is being a poetic loner that he would start talking about the universe xD
ahhh these factors are suppose to describe jaejoong in a way but not complete, just different sides to him, like he could be sad or happy and yes! you got the cloud part >:D hahaha i almost thought it wouldn't make sense ;~; though the other three things could describe yoosumin well and jaejoong being the cloud he is can see all of them xD
i love the metaphors and beautiful words strewn throughout this dear. i especially liked 'a rock of shiny dust traveling in the sky' and the sky and the sea are the same dear, but i would rather be in the sky, it's freer up there. i loved this drabble, very nice! (hugs)
lol i like the sky too! :) i also like it when i talk about the weather or the sky and stuff in general, it's really fun! xD i'm thinking about making a drabble series out of this since it seems so fun writing this~ :D
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and, well, I think no one will be able to understand JaeJoong completely... like... ever
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then i see the descriptions that you give of the earth that yunho sees and i think "you are such a loner man! you need to get somebody (somebody being jae) becaue you aren't romantic enough. they sound all nice and poetic fr a reason." haha. but i guessed right about jae though. ^.^
what reminded me of jae was the fluffy pouting cloud. but it would be cute though that a cloud (jae) has a crush on yunho (human) and is following him around for a whole day and seeing his daily life, pouting when he's with a girl and rumble for yunho to look up at him and notice him. the mouse on the mooon would be changmin though. the sun is yoochun and stars are junsu since he is avoiding the annoying sun. :D
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haha indeed xD yunho is being a poetic loner that he would start talking about the universe xD
ahhh these factors are suppose to describe jaejoong in a way but not complete, just different sides to him, like he could be sad or happy and yes! you got the cloud part >:D hahaha i almost thought it wouldn't make sense ;~; though the other three things could describe yoosumin well and jaejoong being the cloud he is can see all of them xD
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thank you dearest!~ (huuuuugs)
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i like you said universe as yunnieverse
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