Storytime with a cause

[oudeteron]

So this should have been posted the day before yesterday, but LJ just wasn't up to the task (for which it can't be blamed). BUT NOW WITH THIS SAFARI I AM UNSTOPPABLE; I mean, here goes:

Dear cherrytruck, may I present a humble gift to go with the most noble occasion of your birthday? Alternatively, would you like to hit me with a ton of bricks for all the

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[cherrytruck]

[oudeteron]

Dear Che,

HOW ARE YOUR COMMENTS SO LOVELY. HOW. <3

I don't even know; it's like they fit in of their own accord! XD Anyway, you're totally right that treating Kaz as just a loltraitor would be too easy, not to mention wouldn't do him justice in the least. It's only too bad for him that everything goes back to BB, and that includes the bad ;_;

Seriously, nothing says "adding insult to injury" like bringing up Zadoorknob ZADORNOV in a morale-boosting session. XD But yeah, the tension is pretty much obligatory, especially in a scenario where trouble is just around the corner. LITERALLY~ Glad that bit of sincere cuteness on Kaz's part worked for you! <3

[cherrytruck]

[missmonkeh]

Is it weird that I feel really sorry for Kaz by the end of this fic? He's just so unsure, and trying so hard to keep it together even though he's cracking just below the surface. There's something so desperate about the whole thing.

IT'S ALSO CRAZY HOT. BUT I'M SURE YOU KNEW THAT XD

[oudeteron]

Not weird at all since that was part of the intended effect! I think he would be pretty desperate (and it shows in canon he's driven to confess, though there's some uncertainty about where exactly the confession we see falls), and I can imagine it getting too much for him at times.

I CAN'T ACTUALLY TELL FOR MYSELF (the problem with having written and edited something until I can't look at it anymore), SO THANK YOU :D

[athenemiranda]

aah your Kaz ;___; It's like everything he tries to do to make the world a better place only goes and blows up in his face somehow, even MORALE-BOOSTING. Can't escape his own guilty conscience. So sad and yet so hot ;__;

[oudeteron]

You've nailed his problem on the head, I'm afraid. ;__; And very flattered that you find it hot.