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[Fluffathon] What Unlonely Is Like

Jun 20, 2010 15:25

Title: What Unlonely Is Like
Author: me!
Rating/Warnings: G - none
Pairing(s): England/Belgium
Prompt: "Dancing in the rain. England/Belgium."
Notes: Set in pre-WWII. I really enjoyed writing these two, as long as their (admittedly rocky) friendship has been. I should write them more often, pairing or none. ^^

( Fill #1! )

fluffathon 2010, england, belgium

Comments 9

frost_rain June 20 2010, 20:01:53 UTC

*didnt submit the prompt*

that...was gorgeous ;o; <3 (Aww Iggy, such a gentleman <3)

I could visualise it in my head - the images were so clear ;o; <3 your writing is so wonderfully crafted!

such a lovely first prompt post! Thanks for posting it ^^ I definitely enjoyed it <3

ottful June 20 2010, 20:11:37 UTC

Awww, thank you so much <3 Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you liked it! <3

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ottful June 21 2010, 00:05:00 UTC

nooooooo, not lame <3 Thank you so much~!

tokene June 21 2010, 12:00:44 UTC

Ohhhh that's just so beautiful * w*
It's one of the cheesiest things on earth, but I still love the idea of two people dancing in the rail for the sake of it ♥ You did great!

ottful June 21 2010, 21:23:15 UTC

Dancing in the rain is so fun <3 Thanks so much! Glad you liked <3

kasumicc June 21 2010, 20:39:31 UTC

Oh, this is elegant. As if the whole fic had a waltz pace. I like it, it's very pretty :)

ottful June 21 2010, 21:23:40 UTC

Thanks so much <33

faerichylde June 24 2010, 03:32:33 UTC

if anyone else had written this in this way, they would have failed miserably, but you really just hit it spot-on. like -- your writing style, if certain things had been phrased just a little differently (this part for example: she stepped swiftly in front of him, gently extricating the umbrella from his fingers and taking his hand in hers, her soft skin sliding against his silk gloves. She smiled mysteriously at him, the rain shining in her hair and on her dress.) then it would have been overdone, but the way you did it just made me see it so clearly. no purple prose or anything. you also did a great job of characterizing belgium, who really hasn't appeared much.

anyway, what my long ramble is trying to say is: THIS WAS WONDERFUL. DON'T EVER STOP WRITING. GET IT? GOT IT? GOOD.

ottful June 25 2010, 00:13:12 UTC

This... you are so sweet! ;_______; I'm really glad you liked my characterization of Belgium--those unfeatured characters can be hard to pin down. And I'm really glad, I do go for that balance in my prose of description and development of the story, and I'm happy that the proportion I have works for you <3

Thank you so much, you get a cyber hug for being so sweet <3 *hug hug*