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Ficlet: The last shall be first

Jul 28, 2010 00:16

Title: The last shall be first
Author: otterandterrier
Rating: R
Pairing: Ron W./Hermione G.
Word count: 738
Warnings: Uh, well, just at the end, a picture might come in your mind, but it's not my fault :D
Notes: I don't remember how I came up with this, but it was fun... The last lines were the idea that developed into the story. The title was a pain. I didn't have ( Read more... )

ron/hermione, ficlet, post deathly hallows period

Comments 5

lectura35 July 28 2010, 11:48:58 UTC

When I arrived to the Ministry, the weight of guilt for having yelled at him was heavier than hunger.
I wouldn’t say that I told a lie today.

Love those lines ;)
(I know I sound childish and inmature... but I just can´t stand Lavender Brown; not even a little bit...!)
Amusing job!

lectura35 July 28 2010, 12:03:22 UTC

Oh! And I do want to know what the press has to say about Hr sexual life... written by you ;)

otterandterrier July 28 2010, 15:22:19 UTC

;D Hehe, okay, I'll commit to it and write... *mwahaha*

heart_eyes23 July 28 2010, 13:10:34 UTC

I like the writing and concept of this, though I have a different view of Lavender than the one depicted here. Which is not the point.

The point is- you did great capturing Hermione's mood. I the conversation stopper was definitely hilarious. Great job!

otterandterrier July 28 2010, 15:15:48 UTC

Haha, well, I had to write her in a satiric way, otherwise it wouldn't have worked xD
Thanks!