Unexpected Destinies Chapter 29

Dec 06, 2010 20:20

Title: Unexpected Destinies
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: up to and including Exile on Main St., AU from the end of season 5
Warnings: AU
Word Count: 2,412
Summary: Sam and Dean finally meet for the first time since Stull Cemetery.

Chapter 29 )

samuel campbell, gwen campbell, dean winchester, sam winchester, unexpected destinies, bobby singer, castiel, dean/cas, christian campbell, michael

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earth_heart December 7 2010, 00:09:28 UTC
I feel very, very smug about Sam's reactions to all of this.

Take that, you ass. Thinkin' your brother is weak. Psh. If only you knew what he could do, boy. Maybe then you wouldn't judge so harshly.

*harumphs at Sam and his whole little band of merry men and one girl*

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otp_destiel December 7 2010, 20:01:22 UTC
Lol, wow, I really hit something there with you, didn't I?
:D
But, yes, Sam really needs a good wakeup call.

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earth_heart December 8 2010, 00:39:29 UTC
I SAY CASTIEL SMACKS HIM UPSIDE THE HEAD. D8<

Sam makes me so mad in this story. It makes me even madder watching the show, because when I go back and think about it, what you wrote is true. GOD DAMMIT, SAM, YOU DOUCHE.

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scyllaya December 7 2010, 00:10:58 UTC
This was so amazing! I love it! Now I just wonder who the guy with Dean, Cas and Mikey is.

Great chapter! :)

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otp_destiel December 7 2010, 20:02:52 UTC
Thanks! And I'm not telling, I need to keep some surprises back, don't I?

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slashaddicted December 7 2010, 00:17:12 UTC
You know you totally made me remember Adam. I totally forgot about him. He isn't even mentioned in the episodes. They just keep going on and on about Sam's soul and forgot that Adam is down there too. Geez Adam may be half related to them but they could at least show they care about him a little.

anyway now about the chapter. Not to be mean but it was kind of empty; You didn't really reveal any new information and it feels unfinished.

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otp_destiel December 7 2010, 20:05:14 UTC
I know! I've wondered why Adam hasn't even gotten a little mention. It goes to show that his return totally wasn't planned until they were told that there'd be a season 6. I dearly wish that we knew what the original ending for season 5 was! I beat it would have been much more Dean focused.
Okay, would you mind telling me why this one feels more unfinished than the previous 'present' chapter or any of the other scenes that I've split over two chapters? Just so I can get a feel for how to avoid it again in the future.

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karaq December 7 2010, 01:20:38 UTC
Great chapter (as always), but such a mean cliffhanger!!
I do feel a bit sorry for Bobby. Out of all of the above (Cambells and Sam) I do truly believe he wants what is best for Dean - even though it is not up to him to decide what that is.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

~KaraQ

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otp_destiel December 7 2010, 20:07:03 UTC
Thanks! And, yes, I know, couldn't help myself. :)
Yeah, I think you're right about Bobby, but that doesn't change how angry I was with him when I realized that he'd known all along and hadn't told Dean.

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rebbie13 December 7 2010, 01:35:49 UTC
you have to update asap so we can get to the next present chapter because leaving us hanging like this is just mean!! Is it weird that I really wish this had been the way Eric Kripe had written season 6? Because as much as I love this season this fic would have made just as good a season... if only Jensen and Misha wouldn't mind being a couple on screen...

Anyway I am really enjoying seeing Sam's bewilderment and I sincerely hope Dean punches him in the face! because he so totally deserves it. I hope Dean forgives Bobby though like others I think Bobby really was thinking of Dean's happiness when he decided to not tell him that Sam was alive.

Update as soon as you can pretty please!!!

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otp_destiel December 7 2010, 20:10:34 UTC
Lol, yes, I know it was mean, but will you look at the reviews being mean got me? That's like incentive to be mean more often! :)
No, it's huge compliment, so thanks a bunch!
As for what Dean will do, well, you'll just have to wait and see.
The next chapter should be up tomorrow barring any unforeseen events.

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