Unexpected Destinies Chapter 203

[otp_destiel]

Title: Unexpected Destinies
Rating: R
Spoilers: up to and including Exile on Main St., AU from the end of season 5
Warnings: AU, slash, war/battle scenes
Word Count: 3,291
Summary: Sam starts to realize just how big the battle really is.

Comments

And here we go...

[fireflybanner]

I was actually assuming that you would be doing Nano this year. I was delighted but surprised to see this update.

You do great characterizations during the fight scenes - particularly Bobby's reactions. The line
"I never stopped loving you, Brother. Not even when I started hating you." is just as heart wrenching now as it was the first time you wrote it.

[mulder200]

"What ever happened to Father's love being all encompassing and His forgiveness total?" Lucifer demanded.

"Father isn't here now, Lucifer, and my ability to forgive is not so absolute," Michael replied.

"And what of your love?"

"I never stopped loving you, Brother. Not even when I started hating you."

Ouch! That had to hurt!

And Bobby better watch his back!

[pixie_kat7]

Yay, you are back and the story is continuing!! Happy days, glad that you are ok. This is getting so exciting, I'm not sure if I want to read as you post, or wait a while and read several chapters at once and hope that I don't end up on a cliff-hanger. Loving the tension, and the way that you've portrayed Michael's growth and emotions towards Lucifer - very poignant and touching! Loving it all, thank you.

[shipperslist]

Intense chapter!

One thing though: "--everyone had either gotten away or been possessed. He hoped for the latter, but feared the former." Shouldn't it be the other way 'round, hoping that everyone had gotten away?

ouch

[heavenreturned]

Luci was not expecting that response