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Unexpected Destinies Chapter 202

Nov 05, 2014 20:24

Title: Unexpected Destinies
Rating: R
Spoilers: up to and including Exile on Main St., AU from the end of season 5
Warnings: AU, slash, war/battle scenes
Word Count: 2,928
Summary: The Battle of Sabratha begins...

( Chapter 202 )

gwen campbell, dean winchester, sam winchester, unexpected destinies, raphael, bobby singer, lucifer, castiel, dean/cas, michael

Comments 29

wow fireflybanner November 5 2014, 20:51:27 UTC

I can *see* the battle, and your explanation of Simiel just rocks!

Re: wow otp_destiel November 19 2014, 20:02:59 UTC

Thanks!
New chapter is now up.

mulder200 November 5 2014, 21:05:13 UTC

Poor Bobby! Still, you can't have the Apocalypse with the sins!

otp_destiel November 19 2014, 20:03:12 UTC

No, exactly!

shipperslist November 5 2014, 21:13:39 UTC

Oh, how convenient, I can log in with my Twitter account.

Thanks for the update. Poor Bobby...

otp_destiel November 19 2014, 20:03:40 UTC

Yay!
Yes, poor Bobby. There's more on his situation in the newest chapter.

kimberleyqaf November 5 2014, 21:24:19 UTC

Another awesome chapter. :) I love getting a feel for how the different players feel going in. I can feel Sam's frustration, Bobby's trepidation, Simiel's revulsion. Great job!

otp_destiel November 19 2014, 20:04:36 UTC

Thanks! And most of the chapters in this battle with be multiple pov as there is just so much going on and doing it like this makes it easier to show the timing of everything.

wohoo, let the battle begin! ext_2288718 November 5 2014, 21:57:00 UTC

Nice to see an update so soon!
It's interesting to read more about Simiel's view of things - talk about misguided loyalty here...and Raphael really seems to have gotten the point of humanity now; he's even copying Dean in calling Michael 'Mike' :)
Poor Bobby, I hope he's going to get some help with the remaining Deadly Sins.
...is it just me or is Sam back in the 'spoiled brat and prideful idjit' area in this chapter? I mean yeah, he wants to help, but he's got no chance in an angelic battle with Lucifer, so he should shove it with the complaints.

As for a post-S9 AU, try 'It's dark inside' from FictionalNutter. It's IMO more of a humoristic take on the new situation than angst, but worth the read.

Re: wohoo, let the battle begin! otp_destiel November 19 2014, 20:06:45 UTC

:)
Yep, misguided, but still loyal. It was interesting getting into her head. As for Raph, he hasn't called Michael Mike, that was Raziel who did it in this chapter.
Lol, more on that in the new chapter.
Well, both brothers do tend to go into fights where they're hopelessly outclassed on a regular basis in the show. So it wasn't so much that he's regressing as being his old self.
Thanks for the link! It's quite interesting.