You were the very reason I breathe for, but now you’re suffocating me.

Jan 29, 2012 22:54

You were the very reason I breathe for, but now you’re suffocating me | Ryeowook /Kyuhyun | PG | Angst, Romance

note : Title snatched from Tablo's song, Bad. Written for yukwol and was supposed to be up late last year. I wrote a full 3,000 words on word and just decided to delete everything because everything doesn't feel right. This is what feels right, ( Read more... )

pairing : kyuhyun/ ryeowook, one-shot, fic : bad

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yukwol January 29 2012, 14:57:13 UTC
SPOT

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wookiescookie January 29 2012, 15:32:29 UTC
;A;

when the wires in my brain join again and when my stomach doesnt hurt i'll come back for a more coherent comment. for now it's just a crying face

;A;

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otoke1315 January 31 2012, 15:17:04 UTC
*prays for your brain* but i still had to ask, how's your stomach? ;A;

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splashie_xyt January 30 2012, 01:38:35 UTC
That just broke my heart. Q_Q are you going to mend it?

Maturing is so painful *sigh*

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otoke1315 January 31 2012, 15:18:30 UTC
I should coax Kyuhyun into helping me mend it, and it might take some time.

*hugs*

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splashie_xyt February 28 2012, 07:01:38 UTC
I have all the time right now (no, not really) ^^ I can wait! >w

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aoihotaru January 30 2012, 04:22:04 UTC
I kind of get what Wook is feeling. Everybody has their own way of expressing love, and words are not always needed, but sometime, we just have to say it, the assurance is not enought.
I like your fics, they're always deep enough and vague enough :)

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otoke1315 January 31 2012, 15:38:06 UTC
My literature professor once told me to let the readers interpret and i's learn more than what confined me into writing every story. I learned more about life than just living it, seriously :)

thank you for reading and commenting!

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hehehe08 January 30 2012, 14:09:06 UTC
See, this is what I meant when I said that you infused your stories with richness. This is so full of everything, and yet I find myself wanting more of it all, as if it weren't enough. Well, it never really is: your world is so vast, I could spend years just basking in it. And I'll stop trying to figure how you can just so skillfully write the color "yellow" and shimmer it into "gold". I'll reason the concept by thinking that some people like you can just... do that.

This was absolutely delicious.

Thank you for writing this. Your Kyuwook is bliss.

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otoke1315 January 31 2012, 15:58:46 UTC
Your words never fail to stun me, seriously :)
But it seriously took me long to be comfortable with my writing style. Some people are more on dialogues but i am more on emotions (or the lack of it XD) but i read some of your works and i noticed you are more on both, a balanced one.
So it's not my fault if i'll be expecting a lot of kyuwook fics from you, since our fandom's pretty dead nowadays :)

By the way, thank you for reading and commenting!

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