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Torchwoodgate Ch 15 - Into the Fire

Jul 17, 2010 11:05

Title: Torchwoodgate - Year One
Author: Soledad

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Beware the big, honking AU label. Everything that is different is meant to be different.

CHAPTER 15 - INTO THE FIREJack could barely trust his eyes when he saw Gwen barrelling out of the woods and tearing the ghost machine ( Read more... )

atlantis, torchwood, crossovers, torchwoodgate

Comments 19

suellen128 July 17 2010, 10:45:57 UTC

My boyfriend just made me breakfast in bed and checking on the internet, I found another chapter, so this morning = heaven!

Gwen needs a telling off, and surely Jack knows that she still lusts after him.

And poor Teyla with the Kanaan issue, its sad but alas some cultures are like that, its very interesting.

Martha PREGNANT, sooo did not see that coming! great twist, and pretty cute that its with peter Grodin!

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wiseheart July 17 2010, 18:25:03 UTC

They'd make a beautiful couple, wouldn't they? Plus, they're both scientists, so there would be an equality in the brainy area as well, which is important. Despite what certain screenwriters might believe, most intelligent women don't like to live with Neanderthals.

blackalchemist July 17 2010, 10:46:04 UTC

“You didn’t think. That’s your problem. You never think. You’re so fucking sure you know everything better that you never consider the possible consequences.” YES! THIS! GO JACK! REALISE THIS STUPIDITY OF YOUR'S AND SPACE HER!
(Awesome chapter, by the way)

wiseheart July 17 2010, 18:26:19 UTC

Hehe, thanks. :) It was great fun, writing that scene.

Your icon's absolutely hilarious, by the way.

blackalchemist July 17 2010, 21:28:17 UTC

Thank you, but I can't claim the creation of it.

wiseheart July 18 2010, 07:44:53 UTC

That doesn't make it any less awesome. ;)

tygerc July 17 2010, 10:59:17 UTC

Oh, you spoil us, so many good chapters in such a short time. =)

wiseheart July 17 2010, 18:27:19 UTC

Three more to go until this particular storyline is completed. But there will be further episodes, I promise.

badly_knitted July 17 2010, 12:22:52 UTC

Oh, I loved the way Jack tore a strip off Gwen, she really deserved it! It's true, she doesn't often think before acting and on the few occasions she does, she seems to conclude that whatever anyone else says, she knows better. Unfortunately, she got her wish to be back in the relative comfort of Atlantis.

Teyla's situation is sad, but she's mature enough and realistic enough to accept what can't be, with good grace even though it breaks her heart. She's the complete opposite to Gwen in every way, it's interesting to compare the two characters.

I'm left wondering who the last Marine is - it wouldn't surprise me if someone who's not supposed to be there snuck aboard, but I can't decide who it could be. Then again, I'm probably being over-suspicious and you just ran out of names or something. Excellent chapter =)

wiseheart July 17 2010, 18:30:14 UTC

You are a very observant person. Of course you are right; besides, when have I ever run out of names? Character lists are always the first thing I set up. ;)

Yeah, Teyla is great. If only the idiotic screenwriters of SGA had a clear idea what to do with her, she could have been so much more on the show. Like Halling.

Yay! A Tosh icon! And with a profound truth in the inscription. *g*

jsks July 17 2010, 14:09:29 UTC

teyla the antidote to gwen.

wiseheart July 17 2010, 18:30:46 UTC

She's that for sure, isn't she?