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othermewriter

Part 03b Bananas - Secrets (Drabble)

Jul 18, 2008 23:03

Author - Other Me Writer (Story Index)
Characters/Pairings: Mention of Rose, Jack, Romana
Genre - Dabble
Disclaimer: Not mine, has never been mine, no money earned :(
Rating: pg
Series: Moving Forward

Secrets

Summary: The Doctor has a secret he can't bear to share with his companions.
He has a secret, a secret he will never tell anyone, rather ( Read more... )

dr 9, dr who, drabble, doctor who, stand alone, moving forward series

Comments 9

lostwolfchats September 6 2008, 14:37:22 UTC

Brings an entirely new meanning to his love of that fruit!!

othermewriter September 6 2008, 16:13:23 UTC

Yup! I Got pounced on by this vicious melancholy little plot puppy last night. Fortunately I was able to beat it off at a dabble. I much prefer contemplating the ramifications of this concept when he has a Time Lady with whom to share the amusement factor. *wanders off to write about that instead*

nina_ds September 6 2008, 16:10:23 UTC

This is lovely. I particularly like that it's not just the sexual memory, but the memory of home. Sad, but sweet.

Thank you othermewriter September 6 2008, 16:17:00 UTC

Thank you, I am glad I was able to get the emotion across.

amberfocus September 6 2008, 21:57:32 UTC

Oh, that's gorgeously done. A really beautiful, painful memory. So very Nine to hold that in.

Thank you othermewriter September 6 2008, 23:25:11 UTC

Thank you.

The base concept has been working on my mind for a good two weeks now but it took a melancholy little plot puppy to bring out the idea out into the open. I hope all the other nebulous ideas I have around this turn out happier.

wiggiemomsi September 7 2008, 00:30:59 UTC

"No, he would never tell them that a banana to him smelled exactly like an aroused Time Lady, of home and of being loved."

Oh, what a lovely, bittersweet, way to introduce the aroma of bananas! Very well done!

*Hugs... and some carrots for your plot bunnies (couldn't find any banana pics)*

Thank you othermewriter September 7 2008, 02:11:20 UTC

Gladly accepts both. The bunnies prefer the carrots better anyway, well except those pesky sex crazed ones. I've seen them turn down a carrot cold when offered a good sex scene, not to say they didn't have some after sex carrots. *pictures a bunny munching away at a carrot and 10 in bed under a sheet saying 'ehhh what's up doc? Was it good for you too?' and snickers*

Re: Thank you othermewriter September 7 2008, 02:30:44 UTC

Ps thanks for the muse amusement.