Adventures in Sage-Land

[osprey_archer]

Yet again I am trying to rewrite the novel about Sage and her three best friends in their senior year of high school as they apply to college, bake snickerdoodles, study calculus, and discuss whether or not niceness is for suckers

Comments

[vcmw]

I'd love to read it, as I like exactly all of the things you describe as elements in this novel.

I think you probably want feedback from someone better at plot and structure than me, though. My notions of plot are still sort of at "go, have feelings! stare at objects! surely plot will resolve from this!" sort of levels.

[osprey_archer]

How about I wait to send it to you until I've got the plot and structure hammered out, then? I'll need a "having feelings and staring at objects" beta later on, once the story's all done, and it will be better if that beta is someone who will see it with fresh eyes.

[vcmw]

That sounds lovely! When you get to that point, let me know if/how I can be helpful.

[asakiyume]

I will email you.

[minutia_r]

If you still need another pair of eyes, I would definitely be interested.

[osprey_archer]

Yes! Would you prefer a word document or a Google doc? (If you want a Gdoc I'll probably send you the whole thing and tell you where to stop.)

I don't think I have your email address. Can you PM it to me?

[nnozomi]

Looks like you have people volunteering, but this sounds like the kind of thing I would very much like to read anyway; if I can be useful, let me know.

[osprey_archer]

I think I have enough readers for now, but I'll keep you in mind for when it's all done and I'll need a fresh pair of eyes to see if it hangs together as a whole.

[nnozomi]

Will look forward to it when you get to that stage.