Where the Earliest Memory of Rain Takes Me. . .

Oct 23, 2007 23:22

One of my earliest memories is of awakening to the rain. We were on our way back from a church trip down to Washington D.C. to see the monuments and such. Not that I remember that that was where we were coming home from. I only know because I have been told countless times throughout my childhood whenever I would ask about "the time of the rain ( Read more... )

rain, girlfriends, memory, sex, brother, family

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osito71 October 24 2007, 14:02:20 UTC
It's a first draft. I plan to come back to it when school is not so demanding and revise and maybe expand some bits. But I am glad you enjoyed it.

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brownengmuffin October 24 2007, 20:50:20 UTC
once again when I was done I gave a big hum....a hum like wow it's over...why is it over why can't a read more.

So is there more? Could you write more, just for me maybe...could you talk about your memories of another event like, sun, snow, sleet, heat or something. I'm not even trying to be funny you know I'm not.

I loved it...it took me a little longer to find the rhythm though for some reason it didn't flow like your normal style in the begin it was choppy in the beginning but came back to the O writing a I know towards the middle...weird not sure how to explain it...it's as if your hand was writing quicker than your mind...if that makes sense.

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osito71 October 25 2007, 02:17:37 UTC
I already did "snow," back in 2005: http://osito71.livejournal.com/134855.html ;)

Oh, and thanks. I hope to do a few more of these when inspiration hits.

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spear_britney October 25 2007, 03:58:39 UTC
great
story.

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