A Torchwood Nightmare Before Christmas (3/3)

[osco_blue_fairy]

Disclaimer: I own nothing...BBC and RTD (bastard) own Torchwood and Burton/Danny Elfman own the rest. This is what happens when I try to write Torchwood while listening to "Night mare Revisited," a redone compilation of Nightmare Before Christmas songs by modern artists. I beg you all for forgiveness beforehand.

Comments

[vittani]

Absolutely brilliant. One of my favorite movies. You made it perfect by the way. The only thing I'd say is I think it ended a little too abruptly. Like you forgot about the bloke at the beginning telling the story. Smiles, is their any chance you might write more in this world, you know carry on their story a little bit.

[osco_blue_fairy]

Thank you! Happy you enjoyed this little story! To answer you're two comments, first about the ending. Yes, I know I didn't wrap up with the storyteller, who was Jack many years in the future if you didn't notice, but I tried a few different ways to end this and, to me, this felt the best. Thank you for the comment though, I'll keep it in mind for future stories!

And second, about writing TW in Halloween again...probably not unfortunately. I've had a bit of a falling out with TW in the wake of CoE and Davies' attitude toward those disappointed...I'm struggling to just finish the first TW story I've got going. I had fun with this, but I can't see a way for me to continue it...I am very sorry and hope I haven't disappointed you too much!

Thank you very much for the comment and I'm happy you enjoyed this along with me!