Inception - Quiet In My Town (4/6)

[osaki_nana_707]

Title: Quiet In My Town (4/6)
Author: osaki_nana_707
Word Count: 4,516
Pairings/Character: ArthurxEames, OC
Rating: PG-13 (this part)
Warnings: language, mentions of death, mentions of sex, alcohol use
Summary: When Arthur falls off the grid, Eames finds him taking care of a teenage boy that apparently is his brother.

Comments

[atira7]

Oh MAN that's the end?! I mean obviously just for now. I'll have you know I read this whole fic on my tiny ass iPhone screen at 6:00 in the morning when I should have been sleeping but then I was like "Oh, I'll just see what Osaki_nana's up to" and BAM insomnia encouraged. *sigh* I love everything about this (except maybe the PG-13 rating) and I'll wait on bated breath for the continuation ♥

[pen_pistola]

There's something I have to point out, because I've noticed it's a trend in your fics, and I love love LOVE it. You are SO GOOD at writing characters that are human. So often it seems writers are afraid to write about the 'ugly' things. Even if their stories are full of angst, or tragically bad decisions, they don't write about the characters engaging in little, pointless, dumb actions. It almost seems like it's because they don't want the characters to be cast in a bad light (if they're the protagonist). I know this is vague and probably doesn't make any sense, so I'll try to use an example. The part with Arthur stumbling around drunk and knocking over the lamp really stuck out to me, because it's one of those moments people have in real life when things start to spiral out of control, and something just accidentally happens, and you're like, "Well, shit." It's inconsequential, it doesn't do much for the plot, but it is SO IMPORTANT anyway, because it adds a layer of authenticity. You aren't writing these characters to look good

[osaki_nana_707]

Oh, my God.

I'm touched...

...because that is exactly what I was going for. Thank you, thank you, thank you for saying that because I can never be entirely sure until someone points it out.

[pen_pistola]

No problem-in that case, you hit the nail right on the head. Fabulous! <3

[temperance22705]

What? That's it??? Thank god you update fast or I'll be going crazy thinking about these three guys.