Comments | oroja: [Fanfic] The runner

oroja

[Fanfic] The runner

Jul 20, 2009 21:56

Title: The runner
Pairings: Tomapi
Genre: friendship, angst
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I own those guys only in my imagination.

( It was like someone, on the white piece of paper, draw a straight line. Can you imagine it? )

one-shot, tomapi

Comments 31

timedhappiness July 21 2009, 05:33:10 UTC

): it was depressing... thoughts that reflected a lot of similar thoughts that've replayed in my head a lot as well... you really worked the concept of that sheet of paper and the way yamapi and toma ran... it made me sad, but it was the truth... and the cold shower made me feel the angst T_T it's upsetting but it's honest... and i really loved the jigsaw puzzle part. i really loved it and am sorry i cannot say more/give you back the feelings it gave me T_T

oroja July 21 2009, 06:17:24 UTC

I'm sorry that it made you upset (you can kick me or something xD) but it's not that sad, it could be worst ;)
And don't be sorry, I think that angst is forcing to thinking (anyway that how it is with me) so if you can't say nothing more, then, I think, it's good xD
Thanks for reading and for commenting <333

deepmar1ne July 21 2009, 08:07:42 UTC

hey thank you for writing this.. it was... beautifully written..
it gave me mxed feeling, hmm, and i love how you ended the story like thet.. ^^

oroja July 21 2009, 10:11:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm happy to hear that you like it xD
But I didn't end that story, like I said, it's still on, I'm only waiting for them to stop ;)
Thanks for reading <333

amikko July 21 2009, 09:07:49 UTC

tomapi=love. i always think that you wonderfully capture toma.
and i love the 2nd last paragraph. you eloquently put what i'm feeling now in words. tq. :)

oroja July 21 2009, 10:18:41 UTC

Thank you so much!
I'm very, very happy that you like it! xD
At least my story match you xD
Thanks for reading <333

bonkaki July 21 2009, 09:52:09 UTC

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oroja July 21 2009, 10:20:30 UTC

Hey!
I was thinking exactly the same thing, how did you know? ;)
Thanks for reading <333

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oroja July 21 2009, 14:12:35 UTC

Thank you!
I’m flattered that you like it xD (but there are others who are much, much better then I am)
Thanks for reading <333

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oroja July 21 2009, 14:32:31 UTC

True, it doesn't equal, but it's so much easier to write romance and probably more fun, because when you write, you see part of yourself in fic too (at least I do) and writing about tough subject isn't my favorite. You see, usually I wrote fic in one or in two days, but with this story, I spend about two weeks and it was soo frustrating because I just couldn't continue this one and when I finally posted it, I got it off my chest xD

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