Comments | oroja: [Fanfic] Into the horizon

oroja

[Fanfic] Into the horizon

Aug 17, 2009 21:26

Title: Into the horizon
Pairings: Ryopi
Genre: romance, friendship, angst
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own those guys only in my imagination.
Summary: He was alone on the road. Always the same view when all what he needed the most was a change. When he finally got one, he wondered if it really for his own good. Well, maybe he just wasn’t able to discern it?
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ryopi, one-shot

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tellytelly August 20 2009, 04:45:52 UTC

i had the idea the passenger was Ryo and the driver Pi.
somehow Ryo looks more like a convict...

♥ oroja August 20 2009, 04:56:28 UTC

Yeah, that's why I made it opposite. You know, to not be read so easily.

And thank you so much for commenting. I was, no I am, a little depressed that no one read it, so thank you. Seriously, I can only count on my friends xD
I wonder if is there even sense in posting my fics.

badbatazz August 20 2009, 15:26:19 UTC

love it

oroja August 20 2009, 16:39:14 UTC

I'm happy to hear that dear xD
Thanks for telling me that ♥

droot August 23 2009, 15:58:38 UTC

That was a beautiful story!
The way you wrote their story made me think that their meeting was their fate.. I mean.. they were born to meet each other..

And I love this sentence 'Slowly driver started to suspect that the latter was able to steal not only the money, but he didn’t care then.', because I knew then, that they wouldn't be able to live without the other.. that even if they weren't physically together.. they would be.. together xD.. (yes, that's love xD)

I read this story with the idea that the driver was Ryo and the passenger was Pi.. but it could have been the contrary right? Anyway.. the fact that we don't know who is who make your fic even richer (mmh.. what I mean is that it made me think a lot at all the possibilities it gives! ^^)

You're back! oroja August 23 2009, 16:30:46 UTC

Damn... so again I am predictable? What should I do...

Well for me, of course that Ryo is the driver, I usually wrote from his point of view, but again, I like when other have different thought. For me they can't switch places. It's not that kind of story...

And true, you know? I'm talking about that faith. When passenger will do his time, the driver can be there, but just as well, he can meet someone else and tried to forget. Or maybe the passenger will be killed in jail, accidents happens, right? Well maybe you should write a continuation? ;)

Re: You're back! droot August 23 2009, 16:47:18 UTC

Yes I'm back! xD

But don't change anything! You're not that predictable.. You gave us hints of the end during the story that's all.. And as a RyoPi fan.. I'm always willing to see them together at the end! xD

You're right, lot of thing can happen during 6 months.. But I want to believe they will find each other! ^^
But, sorry, I don't write! xD And even if I do, I can't do it in english! ^^"

Re: You're back! oroja August 23 2009, 17:27:58 UTC

I was talking about my future works xD But I just have problems when they aren't together. Sometimes it's ok, when story goes a bit different, but... they are RYOPI!

For me ending looks like that: It's sunny day when passenger was released. He put on his sunglasses, that didn't belong to him, to cover his eyes from the sun and dust. Slowly he moved into the direction of bus stop when he noticed black mustang and a man who was leaning against mask. He smiled when he recognized the other. Without word he took off sunglasses and gave him to the latter. His companion smiled too and with a nod a told passenger to get in. In the end they had millions of kilometers to cover.

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