LJ Idol S11 Week 6: Solviture Ambulando

Nov 13, 2019 17:09


There is spittle in her hair. Amenanta is standing over her, made hazy by her blurred vision and the swirling red dust. She looks like a god, smug and powerful.

“Walk it off,” Amenanta says from above her, arms crossed over her chest, and Heilia feels something boil in her belly. It’s red hot, and it wants to crawl out of her, and so she lets it ( Read more... )

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kittenboo November 14 2019, 00:24:57 UTC
This is so fully realized, it feels like a chapter in a larger piece. Well done!

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adoptedwriter November 14 2019, 00:38:27 UTC
Oh my gosh! What's next?

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nikkiii_brown November 14 2019, 01:04:01 UTC
Oooh, this makes me want more of the story! Great job!

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karmasoup November 14 2019, 03:39:13 UTC
Holy cow, so many questions, pressing for answers, more!

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roina_arwen November 15 2019, 04:13:57 UTC
Very intriguing!

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