Just a little something I cooked up

Sep 02, 2010 00:06

Title: When My Demons Start To Call
Rating: Um G I guess. There's nothing unsavory here
Warnings: None, just a lot of feelings
Disclaimer: Adam and Jay belong to themselves, none of this happened and I make no monies
Pairing(s): Adam Copeland/Jay Reso
Summary: Adam wonders if you can love someone too much.
Notes: For direradiance just because she's awesome. ( Read more... )

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direradiance September 2 2010, 04:26:39 UTC
Hehe, now I can review again♥ First of all I seriously love you for taking the time to write this for me, I honestly loved it to death. I love the emotion in this too, the idea of being afraid you love someone too much is just great. It feels so real too, I could really see this happening with them :) Especially the cheeseburgers and walking through the woods. Damn I love it!

Were you supposed to be obsessed with your boyfriend?
Like I said, this says it all. Oh Adam♥

And Adam buying Jay clothes is just-- OMG. It's so cute. I love it.

"Adam? Please come back to bed. I can't sleep without you."
AND THAAAAT ;___; Is so cute! I seriously love it, it makes my heart all fluttery!! ~

I just love all of it. Especially the spooning. Adam better not say no to Jay♥

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orlisheart September 2 2010, 05:50:07 UTC
Well you love it and that's all that matters. I wrote it with love. ♥

I didn't know if it came across like I thought though. So if it worked then I am happpy.

I really don't know where it came from, I've just been thinking about it for days and had to write it down.

Just imagine Jay saying that all sleepy muffled by blankets.

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direradiance September 4 2010, 06:27:55 UTC
Just imagine Jay saying that all sleepy muffled by blankets.
EFOJKFEJFEJOFWE OMGGGGGGGGG

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orlisheart September 4 2010, 23:20:55 UTC
Aww, thank you! :)

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invisiblesin September 2 2010, 15:20:01 UTC
Whenever he deemed that he loved Jay too much, he felt like maybe he should leave.

heart broken.
I tend not to read the summary when the fic's written by someone whom I know and where I know they write good stuff, wich means I had no clue what this was about. At that time, I thought it could be an angsty split-up fic and I got all sad :c luckily, I went on reading, because..

"Adam? Please come back to bed. I can't sleep without you."

heart mended perfectly. <333

I love the way you write, you should do it (and post it on here) more often :)

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orlisheart September 4 2010, 23:22:52 UTC
I love your reviews! <333
They make me feel all warm and fuzzy.

I think if I ever split them up, I would put them back together by the end. They have to be together that's just they it is.

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invisiblesin September 4 2010, 23:38:21 UTC
Funny you'd say that because that's exactly how your fic made me feel in the end. <3

Phew, I'm relieved to hear that. I honestly don't care how many bad & sad things happen in fiction, as long as there's a happy end because I'm cheesy like that. :D

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myers1978 September 28 2010, 05:02:33 UTC
I meant to tell you a long time ago I love this story... so, I love this story!

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orlisheart October 3 2010, 04:18:18 UTC
Sorry I've taken so long to respond. But I wanted to thank you for leaving me feedback. I really appreciate it. I am so glad you enjoyed my story! :)

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