Grace Fallen (2nd half of 3/3 )

[orionsroad]

As promised! :D Here is the final part of Grace Fallen. I do hope you enjoy and that it doesn't dissapoint. *worried*

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3, 1st Half

Comments

[rainbowpebbles]

HAHAHA UNNIEEEEEE~~~ <--makes you feel old

this was such a PERFECT ENDING. (in my world of fluffiness, crack and woolly sheep ^^) absolutely loved it. the part where jae thought that yunho was gonna give him away, jae responding to his true calling XD and changmin at the door!!!! and and and when yunho pulled out a box i thought he was going to propose XD XD *gets shot* how do you manage to develop a whole world within THREE chapters!? took me 11 chapters and a sequel -_-'''

i never knew jae had uneven eyes!!!! O.o never realised because his eyes become really small when he smiles ^^ jae has such nice eyes :D

MUCH MUCH MUCH-O LOVE!!! can't wait for your next fic :D

[orionsroad]

Noooo, not UNNIE! @_@ *whips out her walking stick and canes you with it* XD

Hey, I'm right there with you in the land of woolly sheep and fluffiness. I likes my boys happy, yes I do. ^_~ I'm glad you liked it, I'm always worried about the ending part of fics, as I usually find it hard to 'close' them properly. And ahahah! The wooden box! LOL, no, no proposing for them. Not yet anyway. ;D

Hey, you developed your world just fine. ♥ I could develop the world cuz there was no details, just fuzziness and no explanations for anything in the world because there was barely enough room for the plot (hence why this 'two parter' became like, 4 parts. -_-).

I don't think I'll be starting a new chaptered fic til I finish Other Side... I've got too much uni work to do, and yeah. I'm thinking about my next project though, trying to decide between two completely different plot lines. ^^; Or, I may go back and do that sequel to that model fic I wrote an age ago. I'm not sure yet. BUT I'll be reading lots. *hint hint nudge nudge* ^______^

[rainbowpebbles]

haha i'm happy just so long as you write!!! but i know writing while doing school stuff is hard, so don't push yourself to hard ^^ if not we'll have to upgrade that walking stick to a wheelchair XD

AAAAAAAHHHHHH i have seen the light :D jae does have uneven eyes!!! but he probably practices in front of the mirror on how to make his eyes look even, so he'll still have many, many pretty pictures ^-^ his uneven eyes make him look a little zoned out :D haha!

[orionsroad]

haha. Yeah, he does look a bit stoned, but not as bad as when he does those creepy huge-eye web-cam like shots. He's like... O_o (ooh, that was mean. ^^;)

But he's still so purty no matter what. *squishes him*... *stares at O-pic and drools* Gawd I love his platium-blonde mohawk. *big fangirly sigh*

♥

[virginangelic]

ILU. will be back with a better comment. longer hopefully.

[orionsroad]

*gives you cookies and tea*

♥ for you too. ^_______^

[virginangelic]

*takes cookie*

This was hugely satisfying since you've handled the buildup of the climax very well. The assasination bid part was beautiful. I just have a problem with this part...

and someone he had suspected not at all. I wonder if it should be 'and someone he had not suspected at all.'

Other than that, I absolutely love this.

[orionsroad]

Ah, well, my writing throughout this entire fic has been a little strange and off-kilter. I'd started writing it like that and it got increasingly hard to keep in-style the longer this thing got.

And, sadly, that sentance fell victim to my attempts to keep up the style, which seemed to work in a slightly lyrical manner in which words don't always go in their most natural places. I probably should have just written it as you say though. XD It certainly reads easier. I suspect there's a few other strangely worded sentances in this. ^^;

As always, thanks so much for your comment... I'm glad you enjoyed the assasination part - I found it a bit hard to write the action scene as I'm not very good with that sort of fast-paced movement. ^^; Anyway, thanks for reading the fic and sticking with it even though I'm horrid at updating in a timely fashion!

♥

[susiegrl]

Love this fic!~
yeah I'm somewhat of a lurker but i wanted to comment that I love the ending~
sorry for not commenting before ^^'''

[orionsroad]

No worries! I'm just glad you have been reading, and that you enjoyed the fic. Thanks for taking the time to comment today. ♥ I'm happy you liked the ending. ^_^

[bellasurus]

AWWWWWWWWWWWW~
*has melted into puddle of goo*
I kept up with this fic ad-hoc, I haven't read it through properly - *ducks tomatoes* but the ending made me beam maniacally. So sweet! *cuddles jae* He's all growed up! 8D

*floats off*

[orionsroad]

BE-eeeel. XP You should read a fic from start to finish you know, not hop along! It makes somewhat more sense if you go in a straight line. haha. Oh well, whatever works I guess! XD Glad ya liked it... ;D Hope your teeth didn't fall out while you were goo-ified!

♥~

[bellasurus]

I DID! Well, I think I read the first two chapters, then I kind of skimmed through chapter 3 part 1, then briefly looked through part 2...and got so melted by the ending I had to comment *dies*

My teeth are still there, thankfully XD

And oh yeah - nice take on the slave!genre, heh. Yummylicious scrumptious sappy ending *floats to fangirl heaven*

[orionsroad]

lol! XD Well, it was a bit long. But I do loves me some sappy soppy ending. Happy in love Jaeho is ♥.

I still think the whole slave thing was totally cliche... (even though I like it ^^;) I couldn't stop myself writing it though, it kept gnawing on my brain.

[anonymous]

that was a very happy ending!!!! ^^

[orionsroad]

haha! Yes it was! I'm a sucker for very happy endings and bountiful amounts of fluff. ;D Thanks for reading and commenting!