Finding Eden [contest fic] 2/2

Apr 13, 2008 17:17

Title: Finding Eden
Rating: PG-13
Form: 2/2
Genre: Drama, angstish?
Summary: Yunho wakes up in a world very different to his own, and has to question everything he's ever known.

Part 1

PART 2 )

contest fic, yunjae/jaeho

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arakasu April 13 2008, 13:39:02 UTC
Congratulations~ =D

So...the world in the white room was real?

Suddenly I feel strange lol XD

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orionsroad April 14 2008, 00:19:42 UTC
Yep, the white room/mental institution was real. hehe, it is a bit strange, isn't it? Since that would mean we're not real either. ^^;

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ara_niey April 13 2008, 13:46:46 UTC
ok..
so the white room where he could see his mother is the real world then?
and the world where he could meet jae and the rest was only his dream?
although i hope it could be the other way round,i don't know why but i'm happy that he chose to be in his 'dream world'..

this is truly a great job!*clap2*

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orionsroad April 14 2008, 00:20:43 UTC
You have it right - the white room is the real one. He chose his dream, because he wasn't happy in reality and saw no point in being there. Which is sad and happy at the same time I guess. ^^;

I'm glad you liked it!

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xxtranscendence April 13 2008, 14:13:21 UTC
Me!

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xxtranscendence April 13 2008, 15:22:08 UTC
Wow... You rendered me speechless O:
I'm glad he will be with Jaejoong and the others, even if it's only in his dream x:

Awesome piece ^_^ *gives you cookies*

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orionsroad April 14 2008, 00:21:21 UTC
*nibbles on cookies* Sankyou~! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

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libellule_3 April 13 2008, 15:46:33 UTC
This is such an interesting concept
I liked it a lot!
But I hope I'm not living in a dream too lol

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orionsroad April 14 2008, 00:22:04 UTC
It makes you think, doesn't it? ^^; It is interesting... a little odd though too. I'm glad you liked it!

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win03die April 13 2008, 17:15:21 UTC
i was soooo confused after the first part.

because the trick was "a twist", I somehow had the hunch that the psychological hospital -world was the real one, but it didn't make this less confusing at all.

nice work, I'm still kind of.. lost with the words.

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orionsroad April 14 2008, 00:23:05 UTC
Sorry it was so confusing! I didn't mean for it to be very confusing but I guess given the switching back and forth it turned out to be a bit that way. >_< If you need anything explained, let me know!

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