Second Choices for Happiness (oneshot)

Mar 13, 2008 23:32

gah gah wtf, I'm meant to be writing 2450203 other things that AREN'T THIS. but hey peeps, look! My first non-YunJae fic. O_O

Title: Second Choices for Happiness
Rating: G
Form: Oneshot
Words: 910
Pairings: JaeChun, unrequited JaeHo
Genre: Introspective
Summary: Jaejoong never 'settled' for a second choice. He just got happiness.

Yoochun was never my second choice. )

shorter then edo-kun, normalacy, jaechun, why am i writing this again?

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_happy_as_rain_ March 13 2008, 18:52:08 UTC
Oh. This makes me so sad.

It's so true, definitely, that feeling of safety and comfort and just pure happiness but... that passionate kind of feeling--so hard to forget. It's like the wanting for what you can't have eats away at you. That's right you do "soar" in those kind of feelings, but there's also the crash, the crash and breakdown.

You really make this so real for me. I can see Jae & Yoochun in this, and myself also in this. This was really beautiful. (I think though, that maybe that kind of static happiness with Yoochun might be chipped away from the onslaught of unfulfilment from Jaeho. :P)

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ladydusk_raku March 13 2008, 19:25:07 UTC
*clutches heart* God, how could you define the whole soulmate relationship and the 'love of my life' so separately in a way that I get it? That there isn't just one way with love that you can be happy. Brilliant. I love it, it sounds so much like--...uh oh. XD Nevermind.

Bah, even die hard JaeHo-ers should love this. It was top notch. -nods- Just beautiful with a simplistic love that didn't need all the crazy emotions. Just a simple hum of contentment like you said.

Your fics are too cool for school! DX *brick'd*

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blurmeese March 14 2008, 06:33:41 UTC
;_; That was just...guh. *looks at heart on the floor* Oh well. Such a bittersweet fic, I really felt for Jae here and the fact that you did the entire thing in first person is O_O sugoiiiii. One more thing I liked is Jae's comparison of Chun with Yunho, about soaring and all that. Beautiful *applause*

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annakas March 18 2008, 21:53:23 UTC
Ohhh this was amazing.
I love how you make a difference between the fiery passion love and the friendly content love.

Both are good both are equal, one i not worse than the other. And I agree everyone waxes poetic about the passionnate love and underestimates the love of friendship. So it was kind of nice to see a fic where the exond kind of love got the attention it deserved and was not looked down upon.

annakas

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miaozi15926 May 20 2009, 23:16:05 UTC
ahh.. love this so much!! can relate to it so much..
really wonderful portrayal of the types of love..
♥♥♥

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