Anywhere You Are (onehsot for Halu!)

Dec 16, 2007 01:23

Title: Anywhere You Are
Rating: PG13
Form: Oneshot
Words: 1 619
Pairings: YunJae
Genre: drama, fluff
Summary: Sometimes, you find hope in the strangest of places. And hope is the stuff that life is made of.

A/N: For snow_halu, who asked for 'teacher, student, Japanese'. Sorry bb, I don't think this was exactly what you had in mind, but it took on a life of ( Read more... )

xmas gifts, normalacy, beauty!jae, jae's got your number, yunjae/jaeho

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velcro_undies December 15 2007, 20:55:58 UTC
This is beautiful. It has such a warm feeling to it.

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orionsroad December 16 2007, 03:41:11 UTC
I always like the warm fuzzies. I'm such a hopeless sap. ^^;

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velcro_undies December 17 2007, 03:03:30 UTC
It doesn't read sappy, though. Not at all gooey. But definitely warm & fuzzy!

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haengbokyunho December 15 2007, 21:01:24 UTC
ayaaa so sweet I like JaeHo fluff ♥♥♥

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orionsroad December 16 2007, 03:41:29 UTC
me too! ;D

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sexineko December 15 2007, 21:03:51 UTC
*sighs dreamily* i think i fell in love with you.

teacher Yunho and student Jae is love. I like how Jae made Yunho's world a bit brighter, and the way you characterized them went so well with the story. Over all it was really really good.

my favorite is the ending scene, with Jae laughing and Yunho's "anywhere but here"♥

write more soon~

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orionsroad December 16 2007, 03:43:22 UTC
I actually had some trouble writing the teacher-student thing. :/ I dunno why. The age gap was fine, I think it was the teacher/student relationship that made Jae keep skittering off and become not-very-studenty. XD So I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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machine_of_july December 15 2007, 21:06:04 UTC
*gurgles*

Ohhhhh so sweet! Such a nice, warm, cuddly fic! ♥♥

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orionsroad December 16 2007, 03:44:04 UTC
*gives you some toothpaste* I know, tooth rotting, isn't it? I can't seem to help myself!

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bellishness December 15 2007, 21:24:27 UTC
Gah, I really love your writing. Their dialogue in this is so clever and sweet and fun to read. <333

It was also refreshing that Yunho wasn't immediately like, "OMG HE'S BEAUTIFUL" upon first seeing Jae, but rather begun to see his beauty when he got to know him. Really nice work. <33

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orionsroad December 16 2007, 03:45:49 UTC
thank you m'dear. That's always lovely to hear - especially the dialogue comment, because I find dialogue to be the hardest thing ever to write. ^^;

Well, lol, I think immediate reaction of many for Jae is 'OMG HE'S BEAUTIFUL!1!'. XD But well, sometimes it takes more then that.

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