Eighteen Forever (oneshot)

[orionsroad]

It wouldn't go away mimei! D: I wish I could write it better - the images in my head don't come out on paper (er, screen?) and it's not how I want it, but for now it's all I can get. >_<;;

... and omg what am I DOING? I've got an exam tomorrow morning!!! >_<;;;;;;

Title: Eighteen Forever
Rating: PG
Form: Oneshot
Words: 1, 467
Pairings: Jaeho / OT5ish

Comments

[vanny92]

SPOT~

[vanny92]

Ah.. That was really really beautiful.
I feel at peace all of a sudden.
If only the boys could really be so carefree.
Sigh.

This piece makes me feel a little sad, thinking about how the boys could actually be doing all those stuff in your story.
But nope, they are slogging their guts out for us. T_T

Okay, I'm getting a little too emotional. T_T
All said, that was really really nice. (:

Great job.
<3

[orionsroad]

Oh man, it looked(?) so much better in my head. The song really inspired me and I got all these ideas but when I tried to write it out, it didn't come across as it should. Very frustrating. :(

The boys love what they do - I doubt they'd enjoy this kind of mundane life at all, they all dream to big to be stuck in some town like that. ;D And besides, they never would have met otherwise! hehe. I think they just need more time off, more time to be young. They do work their little hearts out for us though. ♥

I'm glad you enjoyed it though...!

[wmelon_kaiye]

2ND??? :p (Snuggles into her spot)

[wmelon_kaiye]

I adore ot5

<33
Thanks for this!

[orionsroad]

♥ I adore OT5 too. It came out more Jaeho-slated OT5, but yeah, I love the boys' dynamic together. ^_^

[eskiie]

This made me smile, but I felt sad and wistful by the end of it. Articulate and emotive writing *adds to memories*.

[orionsroad]

^^; wow, thanks! It is wistful I guess... about life moving on and change and such. They'll manage to stick through it all though... these boys can do anything together! :D

[xxtranscendence]

Dang~ I'm too late xDD

[xxtranscendence]

I've always wondered what it would be like to see them lead normal lives. ROFL *strangles self* Well, if they did lead normal lives, then I won't know about them at all =_=;

The ending was really beautiful~ It gave me a feeling of nostalgia *hugs self*

I've always loved your writing, unni ^^ Everything's so well-written and I could tell that you always put your heart into every fic (:
Hwaiting~

[orionsroad]

I think they're all too ambitious and driven to grab their dreams to be satisfied with normal lives. XD The boys love their jobs, no doubt. And haha, we do too - like you said, we'd never get to know them if they didn't!

Aw, thank you~! That's a really sweet compliment. I try to put feeling in them, but honestly I think I need to spend more time editing and making pieces more polished. I never get around to it though. XD So I'm glad you enjoy them never the less!

[machaparfait]

That's really beautiful writing you have there, I'm impressed and relaxed by reading it *_*

(I want to be 18 too dammit. I want to call these guys oppa;;;!)

But yes, umm this is a perfectly crystallized fic, I like the warm feeling in it.

[orionsroad]

Oh, I'm glad it relaxed you and gave you some warmth. It's a bit of a strange fic, so I'm glad you like it. ^________^

(and hahaha, I'd like to be young enough to call them Oppa too. XD)