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orionsroad

The Want

Oct 03, 2007 20:28

I SPAM YOU. :D hem. sorry. 15 minutes? Maybe?Jaejoong wants ( Read more... )

shorter then edo-kun, jae sufferitus

Comments 34

kahel_luna October 3 2007, 13:33:33 UTC

and i want this.

just. ♥ yay for you for writing relentless type of wants, desire beautifully.

orionsroad October 3 2007, 13:38:28 UTC

♥ back atchya! Glad you liked it~!

mikomi_tears October 3 2007, 16:21:47 UTC

So beautiful, the want, the angst. The way the heart, body and mind conflict. LOVE IT! It was a perfect little thing to read at work while I'm bored sensless. ♥♥♥

orionsroad October 3 2007, 16:36:45 UTC

♥ Glad to be of some entertainment! hehe. Hope work gets more intersting for you~! (Although hey, reading Jaeho is a nice way to pass the day!)

vrilly October 3 2007, 17:04:03 UTC

The angst was written so beautifully. I love how you weave words around to describe emotions and thoughts of characters.

WRITE MORE SOON! ♥

orionsroad October 4 2007, 11:00:17 UTC

♥ Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, and the thoughts of each of the boys. ^_^

I'll try!!

untinnu October 3 2007, 17:22:35 UTC

hmmm..umm..Jaejoong likes/wants Yunho? but is in denial?

this is sad!!! Jaejoong is ALWAYS being tortured..poor guy..*cuddles Jaejoong and kicks you*

orionsroad October 4 2007, 11:01:18 UTC

Yeah, Jae is in love/lust, but he doesn't want to be because he thinks it's wrong to want another man like that. :(

I know, I always torture Jae - he's easy pickings unfortunatly. *rubs shins and pouts*

*cuddles Jae too* I love him really!!

kai_yukashi October 3 2007, 17:51:50 UTC

awwwww, how sad :\ but so desperate, you captured the feeling of it well, nicely done. :D

orionsroad October 4 2007, 11:01:52 UTC

Thank you! That's lovely to hear - thanks for reading it~!