Seeing With the Heart [oneshot]

[orionsroad]

Just on an unrelated note, I'm totally retarded, and I've only just worked out how to use the filters and junk for LJ (after only 5 years on LJ~! GO ME!), and so yeah, I've worked it out and will actually start adding friends back now. haha, I suck. :D

Title: Seeing With the Heart
Rating: G
Form: Oneshot
Words: 1,095
Pairings: Yunjae
Genre:

Comments

[irerd_taga]

What a lovely piece! But with a bittersweet ending!
Jae's knowledge of Yunho is so deep and heartfelt. Keeping his oncoming blindness a secret is wrong though. He should know that Yunho is strong enough to face it!
Anyways, a great job as always!

[orionsroad]

Jae strikes me as one of those people who would be making decisions like that 'for other's good' - he wouldn't know how to say it, so he'd try and keep the pain away from anyone else for as long as possible. Actually, I think Yunho would be the same way too. XD

Not something I agree with, but at least they have each other. ;D

Thank you!

[moonbin_is_love]

its so sweetttttt
<3333

jaejoong is tryin to be strong ne?

LOVE <3

[orionsroad]

Yep, Jae tries to put on a strong front and get through it alone. Silly boy!

[chibi_ruki]

this was a gorgeous piece O.O wow so well written. I love the word choices you use in here. very good job! I like bittersweet....

[orionsroad]

Thank you~! I'm so glad you enjoyed it... it all just rolled out pretty quick, but I'm pleased with it.

[ex_isamijae994]

So glad I didn't die during Physics. Now I can read more!!! :DDDD

*nods* I totally get it. totally. not this was confusing in the first place, but ... I understand Jae's need to be strong and his need to see Yunho with his heart and his deteriorating eyesight and everything. I love how you never spoon-feed your readers; you just show whatever you want to show and let us figure out for ourselves. Greatness. *nods solemnly* Pure greatness.

What exactly did you figure out after 5 years in LJ anyway? I've only been in LJ for ... less than 5 months. T_T

[orionsroad]

iyah, Physics. O_o Scary. *hugs* Glad you made it through!

:D It's nice to be... got. (Phear my articulation!) I like writing with less focus on the exacts of everything, but then I worry so much that people won't get what the hell I'm on about. For me, writing is all about imagination - the words are a way, an aid, to create something in the reader's mind - a story, an emotion, an image. If there's room for movement, then the imagination can flourish and paint a more vivid picture. If it's too explicit, I find it inhibits the imagination and the real fullness of a piece of writing. The best writing I've read makes you see and feel, become involved. ^_^ Well, haha, that's what I like - it's a lot easier said then done though. It's hard to make a piece properly 'show, not tell

[ex_isamijae994]

*bounces* That's EXACTLY what my writing instructor said!! His principles were "Write what you know" and "Show, not tell." I was 15 at that time, and didn't take writing seriously, so his advice kind of went in one ear and exited the other one. :P But now that you've mentioned it, I totally agree! You've done a nice job at it. ^^

Yay! to multi-tasking your journal. Yes, that is a good way to get to know people. It's nice talking to people who share a common interest/passion rather than stressed-out students who only make me feel more stressed and that is so not good for my health. XD

ok, I should stop babbling and start studying. XD Hope you're doing great with uni and RL. And never give up on writing!! <33333

[hyungie]

this is amazing. *wipes tear*

one of the best oneshots, ever.

<33333333333333

gah, you're so good. LOVES!!!!

[orionsroad]

*gives you tissues and cookies*

Oh, what a gorgeous comment to recieve! Wow, I'm really flattered that you liked it that much!

~♥