Haha, I hate writing kiss scenes. I had to write one last week for Minotaur, and I think I killed it. Because there's so much crazy going on at the same time that it's hard to get the scene right. Because Person A is kissing Person B, because A thought B was dead and B is now obviously not dead, because what appeared to be B's corpse is way back there and all covered in blood and stuff. So obviously B's corpse was an illusion, so this is the real B which means "oh noes! A + B are in a relationship now! How does A handle this?" Also it's A's fault that B never went back to save her brother from living in a psycho underground death maze. Not to mention that A is centuries old, and B is 16. But deep down A and B love each other, past all the crazy.
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Why do I write so bloody complicated? :(
-GC
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