Original: Gothic Grapes - Installment Two

[originalpuck]

Gothic Grapes: Installment Two
Author: Morgan O'Friel
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1106
Warnings: Mentions past domestic violence, child abuse, and murder.

Summary: Brett does everything in his power to wake Gwen up and keep her safe. Even if that means telling a few tiny lies.

Author's Note: Eek! I'm not used to being on a schedule, and not having

Comments

[13_tezcatlipoca]

Aww, the interactions between Brett and Gwen in this instalment were very bittersweet. I really like his character thus far, and once again, I have to say I enjoyed this instalment. :D I'm also super happy that you're posting again ^^

This time around, I am also the typo fairy. :P Should save you some work in re-reads that you might not otherwise have time for.

a rhythmic lullaby who's spell she couldn't break. whose

he ran a hand through his hair short dark hair that phrase is too hairy, teehee ;)

The Healer, Erin, Is the healer transgendered or something other-ish? Just you referred to The Healer as 'him' when you wrote 'Brett had wanted to shake him' so I got confused :B

To be honest, Brett glad that he was dead. Brett was glad

as soon as he's heard shouting. he'd

That's all I spotted. Really loving this Morgs. Rite moar y/y! :D

[originalpuck]

Thanks so much for catching these things, and I'm glad you liked their interactions! *hugs*

As for Erin, where I'm at that spelling is unisex. But since it seems like it'd confuse readers, I can switch the spelling to Aaron. *nods*