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All the People We Used to Know, Part 11/12

Feb 26, 2008 13:25

Title: All the People We Used to Know (11/12)
Sequel to: The Price of a Memory
Pairings: Peter/Claude
Rating: R
Warnings: slash, AU, loosely holiday-related, starts out on the fluffy side but doesn’t stay that way, liberties taken with the Season Two timeline of events, possible inconsistency with canon materials not aired on television
Spoilers: ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

takethesky87 February 26 2008, 19:16:01 UTC

Claude affected an innocent expression. “Just the essentials,” he said. “Condoms, lubricant, a few sex toys.”

“Oh my God,” Suresh said, covering his face. “How awful.”

“Just doing my bit to promote safe sex,” Claude said.

“Among eight year olds?” Parkman asked.
LOL, should have guessed that Claude would have his fun with the labels. Such great banter here. :D

Claude wordlessly held out his bottle. Parkman picked his up again and they clinked the two together in a gesture of solidarity.
I love the little moment between Claude and Parkman here, just awesomely adorable, hee!

Suresh gave him a dry look. “Who says I haven’t already?” he shot back just as Parkman and Peter emerged from the bedroom, a sleepy Molly in Parkman’s arms.
Heeheehee! Oh Mohinder, you sly one, you. I really enjoyed the interactions among all the characters in this chapter. I wish we'd get more of this snarky and fun dialogue in the show. :)

shaka_chan February 26 2008, 19:38:41 UTC

Pffff. Hahaha. I can totally picture Claude doing just that. Wonderfully in character.

But oh no! It's almost over! How are you planning on ending it? It feels like you've gotten a lot of things started that you may or may not be able to end in one chapter.
... sequel...? (This may just be my love for this fic talking, though. :3 I can hope.)

meli_64 February 26 2008, 20:06:46 UTC

Oh Claude you dirty old brit. :D Brilliant as always. Wonderful voices. :D

visiblemarket February 26 2008, 20:19:31 UTC

“Just doing my bit to promote safe sex,” Claude said.

“Among eight year olds?” Parkman asked.

“They start early these days,” Claude said. “

*snort* Awesome.

The whole thing was awesome, as always; as others have said, the interactions are wonderful (especially with Matt and Claude).

And as I said before, I love how well you've blended canon with this version; it should come as no surprise that I lie this better.

smilebackwards February 27 2008, 15:00:53 UTC

How is Claude so awesome? :) Loved it. Can't wait for the conclusion.