Only Time (2/4)

[orianna2000]

Title: Only Time
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: 10/Rose
Rating: PG-13 or soft-R for non-explicit sexual content
Spoilers: Doomsday, Last of the Time Lords

Summary: When the Doctor crosses his timeline, he is given the chance to spend three days with Rose . . . After Doomsday.

Chapter One

Comments

[honorh]

Good on you for pushing your limits! This is a lovely chapter, full of emotion, and the lovemaking is sensual without being graphic. My heart aches for the Doctor here, and I wish that in canon, he'd been able to go back to his Rose for some good, old-fashioned h/c sex.

[orianna2000]

Thanks. And I just wish he could've gone back for a hug, the poor thing.

[ravenclaw_devil]

BEAUTIFUL - absolutely FANTASTIC. I love the emotions you put in this chapter - they seem to jump right off the screen.

I can really see the Doctor doing this - coming back for Rose at the end of S3 - especially with regaining and then losing again his race (even in the form of an enemy). I especially love Rose's compassion and the rawness of the Doctor's emotions.

Thanks for an excellent chapter - more soon please!!

[orianna2000]

Thank you.

After "Last of the Time Lords" is when he needed her the most. If only he could've had her comfort in canon.

I'll probably put the last two chapters up over the weekend. :)

[harpinred]

This chapter just broke my heart! You wrote this brilliantly and I think you did a wonderful job with their joining. I agree that it made the scene all the more poignant.

I'm both dreading and looking forward to the next part because he only has one more day with her...or does he?! :D

Beautiful job!

[orianna2000]

Thanks! The next part will have them both try to come to terms with their "last day" . . . and will reveal a few surprises.

[javabreeze]

[orianna2000]

Thank you. :)

[brilliantomega]

Wow. Just wow. I don't generally mem fic - but I'm going to with this fic.

[orianna2000]

Thanks! I appreciate that. :)