Suggestions needed for a FF7 fic~ ♥

[fantasia0829]

If anyone remembers, I posted a ZC fic a few weeks back named How to Ensnare your Photographer. I'm writing the sequel now, and I kinda need a bit of help...

Fandom: Final Fantasy 7
Pairing: Zack/Cloud
Rating: Currently PG-13
Purpose: Asking for suggestions~
Warnings: Enough fluff to give you cavities, maybe? XD
Possible spoilers: No

Comments

[xiaa]

Kyaaaa so cute XDDD <333

Uhmm, just throwing ideas out here.

Maybe Zack could write one about trying not to feel jealous when other Photographers are taking pictures of Cloud? Or when Cloud is hanging around the other big models like Sephiroth/etc? Well, that shouldn't be a problem if Zack and Cloud are married, but you never know.
(Or you could do the reverse, since Zack seems like the type of guy that flirts with everybody anyway, Cloud could get jealous XD)

And you could also have one where Zack has to buy specific cosmetics/make-up stuff if Cloud is picky when it comes to stuff like that.

Ohhh, and Zack could also make sure Cloud has fun, like taking him swimming/badminton/etc after photoshoots? If Cloud gets into an argument about his contract or whatever, Zack can be there to make him feel better?

I don't know much about modeling life, sorry >___>

[fantasia0829]

Eeeeh, I like the ideas~~~ ♥ Jealousy should be quite a fun topic to play with. Fu fu fu... Maybe I should make Zack the photographer in that photo shoot, and he'd be all snarling behind the camera. XDDD And then when he talks too much with another model at another shoot, Cloud gets all prissy.

Yum, I like the idea of having some leisure activities after photoshoots too. That's probably a good idea if they just finished a shoot at a swimming pool or something.

Thanx for the ideas! :D

[xiaa]

I thought I already gave credit in my user info, or at least in the icon keywords. Next time, check those out before asking? :/

But it came from the sodasexy website, and the doujinshi is called "Holy ZC Kingdom" or something to that effect. The circle is ERF, but I think they stopped making doujinshi a long while back. At least for FFVII/VIII anyway.

[shiri_matakami]

I hate life. 3rd time lj deleted my comment. I am now writting this comment in a word document...

*SIGH*

[shiri_matakami]

You should definitely touch on how the two of them act at work. Are they all honeymoon-y all the time, or do they act professional and keep their private life out of work since nothing would really be private about a model and photographers love life at a studio? Their needs be a ‘do’ and ‘don’t’ list for what to do on a shoot as well

[mogumogu]

Yeah, beautiful people can be very insecure, and with good reason.

How to assure your model you don't care that he has a wrinkle and that he'll still be beautiful for you no matter what. :3

How to handle your model when he's absolutely exhausted and can't handle attention of any sort?

[fantasia0829]

True, true. Sometimes its the ones who are most beautiful who are most insecure, because it's not always easy to believe everyone who tells you you are beautiful, and after a while, you tend to think they're not being serious. It's probably one of those 'too good to be true' things.

And I like the second idea~ Thanx!

[dareetel]

You could also touch on the amount of attention paid to the model. Like how in your orginal, during the launch party for Cloud's visual book, Cloud was having to pay attention to the people Rufus wanted him to pay attention to. Seeing as how Cloud would be the more visible member of the marriage, perhaps he could touch on how not to get upset when they go to parties together and he doesn't get to spend time with Cloud, since it is more like work for Cloud.

Also, how maybe when they go out to eat or shop or even a play or movie, how much of Cloud's time is dealing with the public. They wouldn't really get to have a normal date.

And since you touched on the whole diet thing, you could also mention the difficulties of getting the model ready to go somewhere. How the outfits have to be perfect and maybe hair and stuff, since Cloud has an image to maintain.

Just some thoughts...I really enjoyed the orginal and can't wait to see your sequel. Hopefully will be reading it soon. :)

[fantasia0829]

Also, how maybe when they go out to eat or shop or even a play or movie, how much of Cloud's time is dealing with the public. They wouldn't really get to have a normal date.

And since you touched on the whole diet thing, you could also mention the difficulties of getting the model ready to go somewhere. How the outfits have to be perfect and maybe hair and stuff, since Cloud has an image to maintain.

I especially like these two, the 2nd one in particular. Men usually wait quite a long time for their wives to get ready; figures Zack would be the one who waits for his hubby to get ready. XDDD

Thanx for the ideas!

[dareetel]

I especially like these two, the 2nd one in particular. Men usually wait quite a long time for their wives to get ready; figures Zack would be the one who waits for his hubby to get ready.

I had this mental image of Zack sitting on the bed yelling at Cloud who is in the bathroom still getting ready.

"It's a bookstore, Cloud, a bookstore not a movie premiere. Just throw on jeans and tee shirt like I did."

And Cloud answering back all patient, like talking to a child.

"I know Zack, I know. But you won't end up on the cover of some stupid tabloid while they declare that you are depressed or gaining weight or lost a job or on the verge of a breakup if you don't look perfect."

And Zack knows that is true so all he can do is groan and fall back on the bed and wait.

The more I think about this, since it's from Zack's book, the more I think it's going to be so funny.

[fantasia0829]

Hee hee, you're right! I can actually see this scene happening, and Zack would whine and pout until Cloud is ready to leave their house. XD

[ardwynna_m]

I can see Zack being sneaky about the eating thing by encorporating something lickable to their foreplay (peanut butter's tasty AND nutritious ^^).

Zack seems to be the paranoid type of hubby but maybe a little advice about how to handle the ones who actually are trying to break them up and steal Cloud away. Or Zack, for that matter.

How to handle the distance when work takes them to completely different places and time zones. phone sex

How to secure your private photo collection away from prying eyes and sticky fingers, because there are some shots of pretty Cloud that should NEVER end up in the tabloids.

[fantasia0829]

Hee hee, I'd thought about adding chocolate sauce to their foreplay, but that would push the rating up, and I can never write anything too raunchy. XD I'm no good at that. XDDD

How to handle the distance when work takes them to completely different places and time zones. phone sex

How to secure your private photo collection away from prying eyes and sticky fingers, because there are some shots of pretty Cloud that should NEVER end up in the tabloids.

Yummy, my favourite ideas. XD The second one reminds me so much of the latest scandal to hit the Hong Kong entertainment industry though, so ha ha, gotta be a little sensitive with that, I guess. Still, it means I've got loads of material to work with. XDD

[ardwynna_m]

Zack could also go the cute route. "Aw, Cloud, I got some peanut butter on my nose."

"So?"

*sniff* "It's such a waste." *puppy eyes*

*sigh* "Hang on." *lick* "Better?"

*voice dropping* "Much." ^_~

Yeah, nothing like touching a nerve with the news. Hopefully Zack's just paranoid enough that with two safes, three combo locks and a gun-toting guard duck, he can pre-empt any issues in the first place. XD

[fantasia0829]

That would have the best tasting peanut butter ever. XD

A gun-toting guard duck? Why does that sound like something Zack would really have? XDDD And he'd have loads of fun training that duck. XD Usually people choose guard dogs, but I guess puppies don't get their own kind as a pet. XDDD

[elkica]

Well... Zack isn't really my thing, so I have no idea what he would write(except Have Cloud healthy by making him exercise, Have Cloud smelling beautifully by buying Lush's bath-balls and using them with him, hmmm...hhmmm...well that's all I got. Stupid I know. xD). But I'm looking forward to it, because there's never enough of fluff.

[fantasia0829]

Lush's bath balls? *eyes lit up* Ja-jacuzzi bath together! That would be totally relaxing and so sweet. Awww~~~ Thanx for the idea, dearie, especially when you're not big on Zack!

[elkica]

Ja-jacuzzi bath together That's sound even better than just a bath and what about the massage with some essential oil, so that Cloud's skin stay silky and ....

[fantasia0829]

*swoons*