FIC: If You Just Laid Down (Your Tracks)

[ordinatrice]

FIC: If You Just Laid Down (Your Tracks)
Pairing: Eduardo/Mark, Dustin/random-but-nice OFC
Rating: PG13
Summary: Dustin gets laid. Mark is annoyed.
Author's Note the First: I'm not pretending Peter Gabriel is cool, but the opening of "Sledgehammer" has always struck me as very wise. You may disagree.
Author's Note the Second: Also, it's about freakin'

Comments

[ordinatrice]

He's not equipped to deal with the loveliness. But then again, who is? :)

[ordinatrice]

Watch this space...

[des_pudels_kern]

Oh, I don't know what's worse for Wardo, a direct refusal, or this... oblivious, point-missing, not-seeing-what's-right-in-front-of-him Mark. Hopefully Mark'll figure it out and not just file it under 'people are weird'.

Wardo's knuckles turn white around the door knob

For some reason I love this detail!

[ordinatrice]

For some reason I love this detail!

Thank you! That was one of those little things that just sort of wrote itself, and then I looked at it and thought, 'Hey, I really like this!' So I'm glad you agree. :)

(And I like your username.)

[des_pudels_kern]

Yes, sometimes it's the little things that make a story. A particular phrase, a turn of words that is just perfect, right?

(Thank you! :D *eyes* You aren't German, are you?)

[ordinatrice]

(I know some German. Had to quickly google "des Pudels Kern", though, just to make sure I remembered correctly. *senility*)

[savetomorrow]

I really like this a lot!
I want to high-five Dustin. And I want to hug Wardo (which is my usual reaction after reading a TSN fic no matter what happens in it - please don't judge). And Mark, for the love of god, I know your brain is brilliant and all but you just couldn't be more stupid.

"Can't have you, can I?" Wardo interrupts quietly and looks up at him from under dark lashes. There's an odd small smile on his lips but it hasn't really reached his eyes. This is unusual. Wardo smiles with his entire face, normally. Hell, his entire body.

"I - don't - you - what?" says Mark, intelligently.

Ah, favourite part. Oh my gosh. Just love it. ♥

Also... I would love to see this continued as well. *coughs*

[ordinatrice]

I want to high-five Dustin.
I know! Go, Dustin! :D

And I want to hug Wardo (which is my usual reaction after reading a TSN fic no matter what happens in it - please don't judge).
I think we can safely assume that nobody here judges you for that! ;)

[merrinee]

asjoznfoeijrpozefn I love this a ridiculous amount. ♥♥♥ Wardo torturing a blanket so he doesn't have to look at Mark and actually blushing is way too adorable. Oh Mark, you oblivious person you. :')

[ordinatrice]

Thank you! And yes, silly Mark. How he deserves Wardo is beyond me sometimes. But somehow he does! :)

[joyce_silver]

lol I really like this:), especially Mark in this fic!

>"That's not the point," Mark says. "It's just not… I don't understand what she sees in him. I mean, it's Dustin."
Wow, although that's mean but it is just soooooooooooooooooo Mark!

luv this<3

[ordinatrice]

Ah yes. Mark and petty jealousies - a match made in heaven. (cf. "It's probably a diversity thing.") :)