Comments | ordinatrice: FIClet: Nine Concentric Circles (9/9)

ordinatrice

FIClet: Nine Concentric Circles (9/9)

Apr 13, 2011 19:09

FIClet: Nine Concentric Circles (9/9)
Pairing: Andrew Garfield/Jesse Eisenberg
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Not true, no profit made.

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fic, andrew/jesse

Comments 11

MY CREYS captchathat April 13 2011, 18:51:27 UTC

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you have such a way with words, of using them to their full capacity, so that every word is absolutely necessary and raw.
like, i would be pissed cause POOR JESSE YOU SAD LITTLE BUNNY but the way you've tied it up and made Jesse so fragile but still strong in the end is really striking.

THIS IS ALL JUST ME SAYING "HAVE MY BABIES?"

Re: MY CREYS ordinatrice April 13 2011, 19:00:16 UTC

Ah, Jesse. Somehow, the more I like characters, the meaner I am to them. Based on that information, you might want to re-think having my babies. :)

kit_kitgoesusa April 13 2011, 21:59:28 UTC

"Jesse Eisenberg, Jewish Geek Weekly, a question for Mr Garfield. Our readers would be very interested to learn if you have been groping any of your Spiderman co-stars and asking them to fuck you in the back of cabs?"
--Hahaha, could not stop laughing at this..

..Or so I thought.
Suffer and pine, and slowly, slowly weigh the memories down with self-hate and denial and file everything that happened under missed chances, imagined chances, fanciful notions, complete misapprehensions.
--You will be the death of me!!

I demand that you.. No.. I BEG.. Hmmmm.. OH! I dare you to write a fic (not ficlet, fic) with a sunnier ending!
I dare you! How can you say no to these eyes!
*makes ginormous puppy-eyes*

When all is said and done, these 9 circles were tremendous, captivating and devastatingly beautiful. That can't be taken away from you.
And though I'd love if you wrote a sunnier sequel, I do respect you for choosing to end this on a sour note.
Bravo!

ordinatrice April 14 2011, 18:18:36 UTC

Well, I'm not going to promise happy, but I do have things on my hard drive that are not unhappy as such. Will that do? ;D

kit_kitgoesusa April 14 2011, 19:10:54 UTC

Of course, you know I cherish everything you've written so far, why would this be different? ^^

thatsapplejack April 14 2011, 00:17:44 UTC

Oh nooo, this ended so sad. Jesse! Spider-Man will be over soon! Chin up, buddy.
This was heartbreaking and so very well written. Love.

ordinatrice April 14 2011, 18:19:12 UTC

Thank you! Glad you love it despite the heartbreak. :)

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ordinatrice April 14 2011, 18:19:58 UTC

Sad and fab sounds about like what I was aiming for. :) Thank you!

scarlet_ibis01 April 14 2011, 07:03:14 UTC

Warning: Long irrelevant rambling. Personal sentiment oversharing ( ... )

ordinatrice April 14 2011, 18:27:33 UTC

Yeah, Jesse will be ok. He'll do things on his own terms, I think, and I like that a lot.

Also, part 9/9! That means the Cocktease Fic of Doom is finally over and done with - on to happier(?) things!

scarlet_ibis01 April 14 2011, 19:22:14 UTC

That will carry him through, not just professionally but personally and psychologically. I think being his fan will always be rewarding - he'll never change, never become a desparate famewhore, never drain out like pretty much most of the celebrities we've seen. Success or fading out, he'll still devote his greatest effort to being himself. And that alone is a reason to love that guy.
Not that I'm a prophet or anything. XD

Looking forward to future postings, happy or not I'm sure they'll be great.