Pandora Hearts: inarticulate

[orchid_falls]

First off, this was supposed to be written for the Pandora Hearts kink meme. But it kind of developed this mind of its own and got carried away in length for what I'm comfortable posting on the meme. Plus as I said, carried away, so I'm not 100% happy that I even hit all of the request that was given. So I figured instead I would just de-anon

Comments

[littlelinor]

*first comment yay*
Obvious denial is VERY obvious XD

[orchid_falls]

Hee! ;D
Thanks for commenting!

[suruma]

Obsessive Elliot is obsessive. ♥
I-I'm a sucker for this pairing and I'm glad you wrote this. Eli-tan is so fun to tease and is too tsuntsun for his own good. ;;

[orchid_falls]

I hadn't actually thought of the pairing until I saw the prompt and then this popped into my head, and I just think I may have fallen into the category of sucker too. :D He's too fun not to tease, so serious!

[dreamer1789]

This is made of awesome & win from start to finish. ♥ Hope you'll continue to write PH fanfic.

[orchid_falls]

Thank you. ♥ And I hope to, right now it's stopping me from concentrating on other things.

[rokusasu13]

You did quite well for this one~ And I'm pretty sure that the OP would be pleased if he/she read it. Well, at least I am.

I enjoyed reading this, and your characterization was just right. Hehe, I liked how you're able to write Reo and his teasing/interactions with Elliot well. The same goes to Elliot's mind/thoughts, of course. And the detailed descriptions along with his comments when he tried to compare Ada's features with Oz's is just priceless. Haha, 'short brat/shorty,' if Oz didn't fall into the abyss with the 10 year skip, he would actually be older/taller than Elliot.

All in all, this fic made my day~ Thanks for penning this!

[orchid_falls]

Haha! Thank you. ;D

Oh, I find Reo so funny, he's like the perfect servant for Elliot's silly ways. There should be like the Elliot and Reo mini adventures! I want to see that. And I'm so happy you liked my characterisations.

Thank you for such a lovely comment. ♥

[krazykrow]

hahahah! I enjoyed that very much! ^^ I definitely find this pairing delicious! ^^ I think you characterized Elliot and Reo so very well! ^^ <3 I hope to read more from you soon! ^^

[orchid_falls]

Hee! I'm glad you liked it.

And I can now count myself a definite fan of the pairing. Oh, and I'm glad you liked the characterisations, thank you!
I hope to be back in the ph corner soon. :D