Comments | orchid_falls: Soul Eater: this is what you haven't been told

orchid_falls

Soul Eater: this is what you haven't been told

Apr 19, 2009 18:51

So this started because stuff that I've been trying to write for forever will not co-operate, so I just wanted some silly and it was nice to explore other characters that I don't think I'll ever write longer for.

Characters: Various - Shibusen
Rating: PG
Notes: Twenty facts that Shibusen holds and will never tell.

( This Is What You Haven't Been Told )

fanfic, soul eater

Comments 19

theprerogative April 19 2009, 18:39:10 UTC

I really liked this <3 Thanks for sharing and writing! Cheers (:

orchid_falls April 19 2009, 20:32:11 UTC

Thank you. :D

wither April 19 2009, 18:39:47 UTC

I'm bad at this whole compliment thing, but I want to say your style is easy to read and I love that. I have an attention span on par with ADD terriers and tend to wander away from stories at a moment's notice, not because they're not interesting, but because something in the word flow seems odd to me and I have a hard time keeping focused on it.

I did not experience any of that with yours and I read it all in a couple minutes. Your word flow is beautiful.

orchid_falls April 19 2009, 20:34:06 UTC

Thank you very much. Your comment is absolutely lovely and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

wayya April 19 2009, 19:11:34 UTC

It was great! I liked the format you use, with short but powerful paragraphes.

orchid_falls April 19 2009, 20:34:27 UTC

Thanks for reading.

alice_rm April 19 2009, 19:20:35 UTC

This was really, really, beautiful and IC. Without doubt, my favourites are 1, 7, 8, 10, 14 and 20.

VII - Death the Kid has a huge secret love for soap operas, which is entirely Liz’s fault
I can see this happening, I can really see this happening xDUUU

Hope you will write more!

orchid_falls April 19 2009, 20:36:49 UTC

Thank you!
And hahaha, believe it or not, that sentence was actually a last minute change about. I had something far more serious for Kid, but then that just popped into my head and involved Liz and I kind of couldn't resist it. :P He'd be such a pain to watch them with. XD

downjune April 19 2009, 20:45:20 UTC

Love how you tackled every character and made references to their wonderful relationships:D <3 I love them all so dearly!

orchid_falls April 19 2009, 21:33:37 UTC

Thank you! This is one of those series where there isn't anyone I'm all iffy on. They all have their cool points. :D