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May 30, 2006 05:14

OMG OMG HYUUGACEST.

Title: He Knows Salvation
Author: orchard-chan
Pairing: Hyuuga Neji/Hyuuga Hinata
Theme: #3, find me in the dark
Warnings: incest
Rating: PG (for light sexual reference)
Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Kishimoto-sensei
Summary: Hinata knows much, but he knows salvation.

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Comments 18

sintari May 30 2006, 11:06:00 UTC

This is wonderful! Ah guilt, their old friend. *hugs Neji and Hinata* I think my favorite part is your description of Neji's lying posture. That's so him.

orchard_chan May 30 2006, 19:18:40 UTC

omg you reviewed/liked! means a lot to me because i worship your writing!

sintari May 30 2006, 19:52:56 UTC

Awww I appreciate that! And yup, I liked it quite a bit!! Write more! ^__^

_acerbitas_ May 30 2006, 22:27:31 UTC

Wow. Just wow. That was marvelous! I loved the last few sentences the best. The way you describe their guilt is just perfect. And Neji? Fully in character. Pretending there wasn't a thing going on during the day seems like just the way he would handle things. ^^ Whew, great job!

kamecchi May 31 2006, 00:24:28 UTC

*is already mesmerized by the second line* *_* You deserve neji spinning for you already! *0*/

Ah, i'm just very dense and not reading in between the lines @_@ *doesn't quite get what's going on* But it's great! 8D

orchard_chan May 31 2006, 02:26:02 UTC

haha don't feel bad. i usually don't know what's going on either until i've finished XD

they've been sleeping together and they feel a tad bit guilty. but neji is neji and he is in denial even though HE LOVES HAVING SEX WITH HER!

this may have been inspired by faulkner a bit....we're reading the sound and the fury in class....

kamecchi May 31 2006, 06:15:06 UTC

Haha, you made me relieved, now 8D *hugs*

Ooh ♥ That's hawt! >u< ♥ The story is great, then *w* ♥

Ooh? What's it about? >u< ♥

kamecchi May 31 2006, 06:16:49 UTC

Oh my god, i just realized that i didn't make neji spin in that first comment! *slaps myself and forces myself to fly across the room*

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heronite May 31 2006, 02:32:47 UTC

*squeaks* This was so wonderfully descriptive! Especially the first paragraph. *hearts* What a wonderful tension! And this:

God knows, it felt right.

... was really hot. XD

Oh, just this:

Hinata knows much; but all he knows that in their sin, he finds salvation.

Add an "is" after the "knows"?

orchard_chan May 31 2006, 03:06:04 UTC

ha good call ^^"

innocentlyjaded May 31 2006, 05:30:44 UTC

^_^ short, sweet and steamy ^_^ brilliant!