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orbythesea

FIC: On As Before

Apr 28, 2011 22:01

Title: On As Before
Rating: R
Fandom: The Good Wife
Pairing: Alicia/Will (Alicia/Peter, Will/Helena)
Notes: Many thanks to rossaka. Companion piece: Childish Things
Summary: He kisses her, after their first semester Property final.

( On As Before )

alicia, fic, alicia/will, peter, the good wife, will, alicia/peter

Comments 9

wildwildwood April 29 2011, 18:09:24 UTC

So very sad to see the preamble to their story at the start of the series!

orbythesea April 29 2011, 21:23:42 UTC

They break my heart, they really do.

lady_with_cats May 1 2011, 11:57:27 UTC

Omg, I hate you so much. My hearts so broken for him. D:

orbythesea May 2 2011, 06:55:31 UTC

Well, yes. The thing that I find most enjoyable (and most frustrating) about writing from a single character's POV (even moreso in something I'm tweaking now than in this) is how unreliable that POV often is, or how skewed. That is, yeah, my heart breaks for him, but knowing the unspoken other side of the story in my head? My heart breaks for her just as much.

lady_with_cats May 2 2011, 08:19:07 UTC

*blocks ears* Stop it, you evil person.

...unless of course, you write Alicia a companion fic. ;D

orbythesea May 5 2011, 16:48:54 UTC

And done.

paperskies May 3 2011, 03:45:28 UTC

this is peeeeeeerfect! and i second the vote for a companion fic about Alicia. I really would like to know just what made her fall for Peter.

orbythesea May 3 2011, 03:51:58 UTC

Thank you:)

A companion piece may happen yet. I've got 48 hours until the end of my last semester of undergrad, and my plan, once papers are done and take home finals submitted is to curl up in bed with a pot of tea and not move for a week. Writing may well happen.

orbythesea May 5 2011, 16:49:03 UTC

And done.